Love Poems & Poetry

Jun 25 2011

Jake

You say
you
understand
what it’s like
to be hated.
You say
you smoke.
That’s a lie.
You say
You think
you the
reason
why I cut.
You don’t know
anything.
The way
you lie.
It’s so sickening
to think
a guy with
Justin Bieber hair
could think
he understands
what it’s like
to be
HATED.

This post was submitted by Layne Frost.

(3 votes, average: 4.33 out of 5)

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9 Responses to “Jake”

1. # pixieon 25 Jun 2011 at 6:05 pm

   this came over as hostile
   it was raw and full of passion
   the writing style was well chosen to portray ur anger
   this was, in my opinion, very original.
   i love it

2. # meghan222on 25 Jun 2011 at 6:32 pm

   you make very good observations pixie and I like this poem very much (5star!)

3. # pixieon 25 Jun 2011 at 6:42 pm

   but dont u agree? it does seem hostile and angry ang hateful
   it positively wicked

4. # anonymousson 25 Jun 2011 at 7:21 pm

   Rotflmao! Justin bieber hair! Love it!

5. # Josiah13on 25 Jun 2011 at 7:43 pm

   ……..i have jb hair…. not always a good thing tho bro (;

6. # meghan222on 25 Jun 2011 at 10:11 pm

   it is angry and all that stuff But doesnt this website thrive off of it

7. # pixieon 26 Jun 2011 at 7:26 am

   exactly, meghan. exactly

8. # Layne Froston 28 Jun 2011 at 1:45 am

   this is just a freakin’ poem that i wrote. i not angry at jake at all. just frustrated that he would go through all this lying s*** to make me happy. i don’t know whether to like him or hate him. SATAN, Life is soo f****d up. *frustrated*

9. # pixieon 28 Jun 2011 at 11:32 am

   well, then. there u have it, folks

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