Jul 19 2011

Just A Boy

Published by at 5:15 am under Betrayal Poems

I was once cold,
I had no feelings,
I did not care,

Emotions were pointless,
I wanted nothing,
Had nothing to share,

And then I met you,
You melted my ice,
You touched my heart,
Gave it reason to beat,

I gave you my love,
And then you broke me.
You left me wanting,
Needing your touch,

And now I am,
Cold, and weeping.
I should have none,
That’s what you are.

I was just a boy,
And it was just love that did this to me.

This post was submitted by Justaboy.

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8 responses so far

8 Responses to “Just A Boy”

  1. Justaboyon 19 Jul 2011 at 7:17 am

    Oops! I caught my typo, stanza 5 line 4. I should have known*

  2. pixieon 19 Jul 2011 at 1:38 pm

    Despite the typo, this was brilliant. Brought back some horrible memories, but it was magnificent.

  3. Justaboyon 19 Jul 2011 at 2:50 pm

    Thank you! If you have memories that are at all like this then I am very sorry, though. This is what made me the monster I am.

  4. pixieon 19 Jul 2011 at 3:21 pm

    Your not a monster, I think. You’re just doing what we’re all doing – trying to survive.

  5. Justaboyon 19 Jul 2011 at 3:45 pm

    Then why does everyone that gets close to me run like I have the plague? I am a monster, because the only things I feel anymore are pain and anger and they spread to everything I touch. I don’t blame the ones who run from me, not anymore, I get why they run, I’m just too fucked up. I understand it, so I let it go.

  6. pixieon 19 Jul 2011 at 4:03 pm

    Are you sure they’re still running? ou sure our not pushing them away?
    And no, you’re not “fucked up”. You’ve been hurt, now you’re healing.
    Just because you’re angry, and because the pain sometimes seems overwhelming, it doesn’t make you a monster, it just makes you human, Justaboy.

  7. iwait4you4everon 23 Jul 2011 at 12:52 am

    I agree with pixie <3 ya girl 😀 you have a way with words just keep it up and no one is too fkd up for love.. some things just takes patience as i have had a hard time learning with my situation… my guy thinks he is too fkd up but hes not in my eyes.. does he have issues… yes… do they change how i feel about him… no… no matter how awful he can be to me sometimes.. or how many times he pushes me away… after i get through all of my own issues and realize its because he is scared of being hurt again and losing me forever… i have begun to understand and try to keep some things to myself til he is ready.. or realizes… love means loving both the good and the bad in a person.. and being there for them regardless.. it may take years but in the end.. he is worth it because he is the only one who will ever have every single piece of my heart… i am thankful we are friends so that i can at least stay in his life even if we are never together again in the way i would like.. I wish you well just.. maybe it is only time you need hun… and above all make sure ya tell em how you really feel its very impt. and keep writing!!!! i love to read as well as write myself :p

  8. Justaboyon 23 Jul 2011 at 5:24 am

    Thanks I guess…I’m glad you enjoyed it and I hope things work out with you and your boyfriend. 😉

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