Nov 20 2011
Lie?
Why don’t you trust me when I’ve always been faithful
You told me because I look like the type
You cheat on me when ever you want
It kills me on inside
But last time you did, I almost killed myself.
The day before you told me that you loved me
Lie
You told me you would never cheat on me again
Lie
Said that you knew how it felt
Lie
Because if you knew how I felt when you cheat on me
Believe me
You would nevet do it again
I asked you with a sincere heart
“Would you ever hurt the one you love”
You told me no.
Lie
You told me that you loved me
I believed you
You looked me in the eyes
Gave me a kiss
But when your young
You believe it
I was stupid
Love isn’t for me
Sad, because I’m only fourteen
I don’t understand
Well I guess that’s my fault
Because love isn’t anything like I thought
~nae
(5 votes, average: 4.80 out of 5)
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I’m thirteen and I really can’t fall in love with anybody so this stuff usually doesn’t happen to me,but if it did this is probely how I would feel
This poem is very, illogical, therefore it’s a waste of time and utterly stupid 😀
Why do you have such moronic thoughts, such as writing disgusting poetry?
I’ve always wondered…
But anyways,
Have a great sunny day <3 (Lmmfao it's winter)
Max, you are one of the most retarded creatures I have ever had the displeasure of meeting.
I sincerely hope something terrible happens to you.
Oh, and by the way, this is a great poem.
Aww, I’m flattered you despise me 😀
Now I don’t have to hope something bad will happen to you, because you’ll probably hang yourself one day, sooner or later 😛
Probably. I’ll watch you screaming as you burn in Hell, too.
Can’t wait
..pixie just wondering, how old are you? u have fricken 86 poems holy crap
Most likely you will.
You gotta pay for your crimes you know.
See you on the other side?
Nah, I’m too proud.
How many times have you cut yourself?
Too many to recall?
You’re weak.
Are you unable to cry?
Sorry if I’m bothering you, I’m just curious.
Max yu Fucking BItch..
See i tried to kindly tell you to go away but obviously yur on crack.
I seriously hope you roit in Hell and I hope that satin rips your flesh off and boils you in oil because yu are a fucking evil devil..
Have fum in Hell
:kiss:
HAHAHA!!
Wow!!
Yur back again really.
Ohkay first of all~
GET THE FUCIK!! Of my poems comments
If i hate your comments on other proms then what possesed you to think that i would welcome you one my poem
Obviously you have no heart.
I guess other peoples pain helps you sleep at night. KNowing that you ruined someones day.
Just lookat a poem, rate it and leave.
NO one has time for your bull****
>>Pixie>>Thank you for yur kind comment because it coming from you means alot
>>MAX>>Please go some where, fuck your self and happily roit in hell:)
Thank you, and have a day blessedwithlove:)
😀 Thank you, I really feel your love.
Yay, hear that?
The audience is clapping!
You guys are so idiotic, senseless, and imbecilic.
Don’t you know I find your “comebacks” a joke?
If you want me to go away, ignore me. Simple as that, shithead.
Did nobody ever teach you common sense?
God, please have mercy on your children.
And I agree with you completely, I will burn in hell and I’m okay with that. I will embrace it, because I don’t run from my problems i don’t hurt myself. I walk with my head held high and laugh at fools like you.
You have a great time too honey (ignorant hypocrite)
XOXOXOXO
… Okay, then. Uhm, Josiah, I’m 13 at the moment.
And Pretty Gurl? Sorry for spamming your poem :p
I think that its sooooo funnie tha you keep commentin on our poems.
I think that its just soo funnie that we are just so stupid and shit but yet you keep commin back and reading.
SO OBVIOUSLY you have nothing better to do and we just make you fuckin day
Well i hope I do, Because believe me, you make mine haha
AUR REVOIR 8)
Actually I thoroughly enjoy my comments. But more especially your reactions to bs. Makes me laugh too much.
Your welcome, I always appreciate a follower, yes you’re uneducated and have the wits of a flea. But you’re still pathetic enough to make me laugh. Now I hope you don’t call ME pathetic, that would be so unoriginal. How cliche.
P.S. In case you didn’t know, I just LOVE my heart out when it comes to your poems. They inspire my comments 😀
you “LOVE my heart out”
Hunney that make absolutly no sense.
Ha i was just thinking, the way yu respond to our comments,
I reminds me of cleverbot lol sad.
But personally I’ve stopped caring about your comments.
Me responding to your comments is just, well stupid.
But i do have to say, if you say something that i really don’t like then i will have some thing very nice to say to you:)
Every thing your saying to me right now, qualifies you
Congradulations you’ve just recieved official hater status!! Nd I :love: Haters
So have fun commenting because i just relized that your not worth my time
Me commenting to you is just lowering myself to your level.
So I welcom your comments and I hope you have fun
>>Pixie, thank you commenting on my poem, its ok that it got spammed
>>Sweet Candy, thank you also.. and yeah I’m 14, and your an awesome poet
>>Back to Max>> I dnt care if you think that I’m ‘ghetto’ because obviously you don’t know what it is.
And if you respnd to this comment, It will show how much you truely are an idiot.
Ofcourse your gunna respond(because ofcourse your an idiot)
LOVE YOU TOO hunn
Can’t wait to make some awesome poems :p
Im pathetic:) well your the dummass who keeps comin back
GOD your so thirsty
Im uneducated
Haha i guess mon chou chou
What ever floats your boat
And hunney, just to let you know, that just because you use more complicated more complex words, doesn’t mean you know how to use them
And Frankly, I would really like to read one of your spactacular amazing poems.
And until you write one that blows my mind (Which i guess isn’t gunna happen)
Then back the fu** off this site, because this is a ‘FRIENDLY’ Website and no one obviously wants you here.
Apparently your not mature enough and your mind can’t comprehend the deeper meaning to all these poems,
So until your able to understand, ofcourse you’ll think that they are dumm and stupid because if you don’t like this poem and your can’t feel the pain she’s going through, then you need to seriously read it over and over and over again untill you get it through your head. I guess you have a perfect life and your in the best relationship ever because you come over here and act like you have not feelings, haha ohkay what ever.
as entertained as i am by reading all these comments..
all I’d really like to say is, your poem is really good pretty gurl and who ever he is doesn’t deserve you!
Thanks 🙂
Haha @ Kayla, Thank you ! 🙂 <3