Jun 03 2005
Lifeless
Love and friendship Poem
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Joe sat in his house, a house made of red,
He pondered the party of fun that lied ahead,
He knew she would be there, he knew she would wait,
He hoped that tonight he could ask for a date,
A shower so great, it made him feel new,
He put on his clothes as it seemed like time flew,
He got all together, sweet smell and all,
He grabbed his coat and went off to the ball,
He showed up not longer, and joined in the fun,
He grabbed a fresh beer and said, “I’ll just have one,”
He looked for the girl, she was no where to be,
As he walked up stairs, not knowing what he’d see,
Billy was with her, in the room long a head,
Billy; Joe’s best friend and her in the bed,
He opened the door, beer in his hand,
The door was then slammed by Billy’s demand,
Joe went back down stairs with fire in his eyes,
But hided his anger; He needed to disguise,
He joined in the party, as tears rolled from his face,
14 beers later, His mind started to race,
He jumped in his car, it was time to go think,
He knew how much beer he just had to drink,
He went down the road, a road made of hate,
Just to think that tonight he could ask for a date,
Shattered, cold, broken within,
Joe still showed a hateful long grin,
He tore though the roads at speeds uncontrolled,
A ditch, 3 trees, that crash course car rolled,
Ejected from the seat Joe went 20 feet,
50 yards downhill from the street,
He lied in the pain, as he sat in the rain,
As 1 million thoughts then ran though his brain,
No one came looking, not even Billy the best,
He was having fun, just like all the rest,
With the girl that Joe wanted, Oh Billy he knew,
Joe was drunk, he was hurt, he didn’t think these things trough,
Joe lied bleeding with the rain pouring down,
2 days later, Joe he was found,
Lifeless along not 10 minutes from home,
Lying so lifeless alone.
-Dennis Mayer
(1 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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SAD
omg dis poem is so sad
i really feel the essence of this poem. i love it!! ajah!
oh my god that is so sad
your a really great poet.really deep.i like your work!
You are a great write. I\’ve read more than just a couple of your poems. You have magnificent poetry and I love it. This one is sad, but it has life to it. Even poetry about death has life in some point. I know how it feels to go to a party and find the person you like with your best friend. It really hurts. I was just smart enough to have someone else drive me to their house and I stayed the night with another friend. Smart thinking, eh? Well keep posting and I\’ll keep reading.
Love Always,
Puppet
i love this,if you have more,you hsould post them,i love reading them.
[B]wow that was supper sadd :[[/B]
[I]and really good :][/I]
MAGNIFICENT POEM I RATE IT AT A 9.8
amazing..but sad
dats one *ucked up bestfriend!!!!!!!
BUT I LOVED IT!!!!!!!
wow thats crazy its so sad it made me cry i dont know how friends can do that to freinds and they didnt even fin him untill two days later wow! :cry
I Loved Tis Poem So much
What a lesson To Learn
What a class poem,its so sad,every word!!!Keep writing!! 🙂
:cry :cry :cry :cry reminds me of sumthing in my life but withoout death
[B]wow how sadd!![/B] :cry if that would happen to me i wouldn\’t be able to live with myself….but great writing skills!! keep writing :grin
[B]omg[/B] dat waz soo sad :cry i cryin now lol :cry :cry :cry :cry
:cry :cry :cry
Aww Thats Well Cute x
that was so tauching, and beautyful
i [B]LOVE[/B] this poem
it\’s really sad but it does tell a great lesson in love x3
simply lovely
[I]this really remindes me of my ex except I am joe and my best fren is billy and the girl is my ex boyfren[/I] :sigh
hey i love ure poem!! dont ever stop writhing cause ure really good 🙂
Dennis mayer…….i\’ve been searching for and book or website of your poetry……so far i\’ve drawn a blank. the poems of yours that i\’ve read i love and i think a website or a book of them would be really successful. i would buy one anyway 🙂 plus here\’s something interesting, i\’ve got the same surname as you ….well maybe not that interesting just curious 🙂 i love ur poetry
love eleanor c-mayer
thats is the strangest thing i ever read in my whole life………. 👿
had me amused all the time i was reading it. come sit over here tell me moore.
That was really good, and I really liked it. Good job 🙂
omg this poem touched my heart. it so sad but so great!
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