May 11 2011
Silly
im extremely silly
laughing, joking,smiling
im always so excited
yet when i say “im fine”, im lying
its all pretend, its all unreal
id rather not defend, thats the deal
i got lost along the way, though
i forgot who i am
it doesnt matter… so
who gives a damn?
(4 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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The rhyming was odd.
Overall, this poem was clumsy and poorly written.