Oct 25 2005

Love cheated

Published by at 9:53 am under Heartbreak Poems

Count the nights
hypnotizing mists
Sad sights come
then,
Painful flights
and
heartbreaking goodbyes

Fantasies, a form of sanity
then,
realization and sighs

No need for clarity
Tender and stiging pain
Clutches an aching soul.
Loneliness, the creation of woe
Pouring rain
left out in the cold

Explanations potray desperation
and
a broken love song
Again the past smothers every reason
of
much needed release
Hopes like the carrying wind
kissing the fresh wounds

I still love you
why have you forgotten?
now
I’m tortured
The imprisonment of cheated love

please go away.

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45 Responses to “Love cheated”

  1. # Gueston 27 Oct 2005 at 11:59 am

    thats one of the best poems ive ever read it really describes the feelings people can have for someone

  2. # Gueston 07 Nov 2005 at 10:33 pm

    There\’s Really Big Words In It:S Really Confusing But Itz All Good Im Only 15..But The Feeling Is Great!

  3. # Gueston 09 Nov 2005 at 1:10 am

    such beautiful imagery and details…so fluid….and i can relate to this…it\’s absolutely beautiful.

  4. # Gueston 20 Jan 2006 at 7:41 am

    gangsta gdgd

  5. # Gueston 18 Dec 2005 at 2:11 am

    NICE!!!

  6. # Gueston 20 Apr 2006 at 5:37 am

    [I]Thx for all of ur comments, I\’m only 16 so itz fantastic to hear that other ppl can relate to what I\’ve written.[/I]

    -Edoria-

  7. # Gueston 28 Feb 2006 at 9:12 am

    This was a really good poem, but it needs more action in the poem. Like so it can make me cry. but it is better what then i can do. good job who ever did this.[LIST][B]teen[/B]

    chasidi
    from Dell Rapids, SD

  8. # Gueston 25 Apr 2006 at 10:07 pm

    I[B]Love[/B] it.

  9. # Gueston 18 May 2006 at 1:16 pm

    [B]Is okay i dont really like it is aite!!!…..ummm… PEACE NiGGA[/B]

  10. # Gueston 22 Mar 2006 at 11:17 pm

    [B]this is amazing.[U]amazing[/U][/B]

  11. # Gueston 04 Apr 2006 at 4:57 pm

    it\’s straight

  12. # Gueston 17 Sep 2006 at 4:50 pm

    i loved this poem it was so beautifull…and in a way sad it kinda makes ur heart ache…when u think about it real hard,,,

  13. # Maheshon 04 Feb 2007 at 12:57 am

    Nice

  14. # brendaon 21 Feb 2007 at 6:42 am

    :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz :zzz

  15. # Emmaon 04 Apr 2007 at 12:36 pm

    I can really relate to this poem 🙂 Im also 16 and this gave me confidence in knowing that im not the only one out there going through this feeling 🙂

  16. # AIMEEon 09 Apr 2007 at 12:34 am

    I LOVE THIS POEM IT\’S ASOME I LOVE IT !!!!!!!! :p

  17. # khaion 13 Apr 2007 at 3:33 am

    🙁 it really hurts when u love sum1 but she doesn\’t really care…

  18. # Brookeon 23 Apr 2007 at 10:55 pm

    [B]null[/B] 😕 :roll 🙂 :grin :eek :cry 🙁 😡 :sigh :zzz :upset 😉 8) :p

  19. # samanthaon 01 May 2007 at 1:52 pm

    this is what i am going throught now but it makes me cry at night when i think about it but now i can see outhers are going throught it to i hope we can get throught it toughter 😡 :sigh :zzz :cry 🙁

  20. # UITYUon 01 May 2007 at 8:56 pm

    :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry

  21. # shaunaon 30 May 2007 at 4:30 am

    :cry THAT POEM IS EVERYTHING I AM FEELING AND I JUS CAN\’T SEEM 2 STOP CRYING AND I FEEL LIKE THERE IS NO1 TO TALK 2 AND I JUS DNT KNOW WAT 2 DO :cry

  22. # Mauson 02 Jun 2007 at 5:41 pm

    :eek It so true wht u told, i just luv the poem

  23. # APRILon 03 Jun 2007 at 7:33 pm

    this is a great poem much talent++++ well my husband broke my heart when i caught him with one of my b/f from experience—be careful who ur friends are and yes i forgive my husband :sigh :sigh :sigh

  24. # Reekahon 06 Jun 2007 at 11:14 am

    AWWW…DIS POEM IS SO GOOD…I LUV IT!!

  25. # Ashleyon 12 Jun 2007 at 3:59 pm

    :sigh I know what this peom means too. My ex boyfriend cheated on me as well. I was with him for 3 months and living with him as well. All I knew was that he went to work and came home every day around 4. \”But then i found out 3 months into our relationship he came to me and said we need to talk. I said okay, He told me that he did something that will change our lives i told him i didnt know what he was talking about i told him im not pregnant. He said not you But my ex girlfriend is and the baby is mine. All this time i never even knew that he did that to me. I am still trying to forgive him but how can you forgive someone from doing something like that. But i know that i have to move on and i know that i am not ready for a relationship just yet.

  26. # abbyon 15 Jun 2007 at 5:08 pm

    this is something i can relate to my friend like the guy i really love but its all good i would want him 2 b happy other then me i know that who ever is heart broken will get though it it really hurts well this is something i really liked keep it up .
    good job

  27. # priciiiiiiiiiion 23 Jan 2008 at 4:36 am

    [B]OMG[/B]
    this is like the best poem ever like yeah like omg!!!! yeas i love it yeahh omg imm your fan i totally loved youuur poem seriously like wooow so much haha lolbye

  28. # YliNaon 26 Jan 2008 at 11:07 pm

    it\’s really sad if someone cheated on you, especially when you really loved and trust that person so much. all that was left are questions why???,,, :sigh :cry

  29. # gueston 14 Feb 2008 at 11:00 am

    my husband cheated on me with his second cousin and now she expecting. i felt the knife in my heart when i found out.get poem thanks.

  30. # lisaon 14 Feb 2008 at 11:07 pm

    i know how you feel i\’ve been married five years my husband cheated on me and then just up and left now he\’s back whanting a mems but in my heart i know i\’ll never realy forgive so its best to say goodbye and leave it as freinds.

  31. # Tashaon 25 Feb 2008 at 12:43 pm

    i not like when guy hurt u all the and when say thatr love u but they just keep come back to hurt u more time :cry

  32. # Stacion 03 Mar 2008 at 8:46 am

    I just found out about the cheating this Friday, so I haven\’t even gotten over the shock yet. how do I begin to forgive? should i even do that? :sigh :sigh :sigh :cry :cry :cry

  33. # Navaon 14 Jun 2008 at 9:47 pm

    that was so sad i cried

  34. # Heart_Br0ken. on 12 Nov 2008 at 12:26 pm

    :sigh

    this poem is soo true.
    -> to all my ladies; never make a guy your everything cuz when he leaves youll have nothing. No matter how sweet you reall y cant trust a guy. They always tend to run back to thier ex\’s even if its only for on night. that one night hurts. trust me on this one. its not worth the heartbreak.

  35. # MiSS CAmon 24 Aug 2009 at 2:40 am

    can somebody Hel me, ive been hert soo bad , i dont know what too do?! :sigh

  36. # cheyenneon 12 Sep 2009 at 4:54 pm

    i really loved this dude and he broke my heart he said we are more on a sister brother relationship and i guess i can agree except the fact is i still love him and he said he still loves me i don\’t know what to do :sigh :cry :cry

  37. # cheyenneon 12 Sep 2009 at 4:54 pm

    i really loved this dude and he broke my heart he said we are more on a sister brother relationship and i guess i can agree except the fact is i still love him and he said he still loves me i don\’t know what to do :sigh :cry :cry

  38. # eddieon 19 Sep 2009 at 3:06 pm

    Very nice, Love really hurts sometimes….beautiful poem!!

  39. # Mackenzieon 14 Dec 2009 at 9:54 pm

    This guy I loved…Kaiden…asked me to be his girlfriend last year. I didn\’t realized I loved him until a few weeks after I said \’No!\’..so then other people came to my class in the new year…and Kaiden fell for Julia. Then I realized I needed him..but I was too late. Now they hang out 24/7, and at Julia\’s party, they kissed on the lips…and at school…[U]null[/U] Right in front of me.[U]null[/U] I THOUGHT HE LOVED ME..BUT I GUESS HE DIDN\’T!!

    Kaiden, too bad your never on the internet because if you were reading, this, you know how I would feel..

    ❤Mackenzie + Kaiden = NEVER ❤

    :\’.(

  40. # Mitchellon 20 Dec 2009 at 3:02 pm

    thats not true.. ill never heart a woman.. u think im talkin rubbish now.. but its true i would rather die then hurtin someone.. never get back with a man who has cheated on you especially on young age.. cuz there is a big chance they will do it again.. we ass lovecouple can hurt eachother.. but never ever get hurted by someone who doesnt really love u.. discover what he really feels.. like me im inlove with a girl but i dont think she rly understands that ill go for her in good and bad times she has a scar across her heart by some boy who hurted her.. its so sad and so unfair cuz i got so much to give

  41. # karla on 03 May 2010 at 7:27 pm

    hi edoria my name is karla and i want to tell you that your poem is every good and i would like for you to write some more so i can read them to my class mates because we are working on poems and i would like it if you can do that thank you from karla

  42. # cecilia chamulon 13 May 2010 at 9:36 pm

    i just found out the boy i like asked me out and i refused but then he just went right ahead a got a new girlfriend and i really want him now i don\’t know wht to do tell him how i feel or just forget him? 😡 :upset 😕

  43. # ashishkumar haldaron 21 May 2010 at 5:26 pm

    well….

    da\’am shit man….someone cheated me too…..and it was fucking hurtfull…..as i loved her more than anything…..more than my life….

    but i cant love someone who doesnt deserve it…..

    though sometimes it still hurts…..but no more pain for someone like her…..

    and by the way guys….i got proposed two times after that….but i just dont feel loving someone for now…..maybe later

  44. # Heart brokenon 26 May 2010 at 12:51 pm

    So sadd going thru that right now all the pain bottled up letting it out ad anger….. I feel as tho even then he did not care. Did he know I\’m in pain??? No I don\’t think so….. :sigh

  45. # iwait4you4everon 30 Sep 2010 at 10:41 am

    very good poem.. i too can relate all to well.. it sucks when you have a forever kind of love but the other person.. chooses not to fight for it and instead gives up… It really sucks when that person was also one of the people you considered to be your closest friend..

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