Nov 20 2011
Lust
Acid sting, taste of lust
Release has now become a must
Itchy skin, comfort gone
Mind filled with these thoughts – so wrong
Rage and sex, wanting this
Seeking what I need for bliss
Rip and shred, keep going
I know I need, I need something
Kiss of fire, blazing ice
Need so strong, take her twice
Grunts and moans, wicked grin
Laughing with this need to sin
Swallowed pleasure, rising heat
Curling toes, stomping feet
Sighs of bliss, washing peak
Masochist, painful streak
Sadistic urges, forced on me
I take it all quite happily
And as I come, in this dark night
I think I almost feel alright
I was wondering are you a boy or a girl because it’s sometimes hard to tell with the user names
Mhhhmmm, interesting question.
I bet this “pixie” is genderless. If you don’t think about it, it makes complete sense.
Anyways, I love you guys, you always make me lmao with your “poetry”
XOXOXOXOXOXO
P.S. I didn’t have to read this poem to know it’s dark(and awful)
I’m female, though the poem is written from a male perspective.
Max, I almost feel insulted. “Poetry”? As if it’s poorly written, amateur junk?
And, no. The poem isn’t dark. It’s about sex, not depression.
Weird.
Well i don’t care about what persective,
Its really nice and beautiful 🙂
^_^
Thank you again :p
😀 ilove the words you have written and plus its sex and sex is something i relate to alot lol x
Lol 😀
Thanks so much for reading. And I’m glad you relate 😛
Max: Don’t be a troll. You didn’t have to read it, but it sure would have made you look like less of a jerk-faced idiot if you would have.
Pixie: Well Written. Has a certain lascivious and erotic quality, but not overdone. Beautiful work, but a sad reminder that I am pent up alone, at least for now. My problem; not yours! Still though. Good work.
Thank you for the kind comment 😀
I love it… Ima send dis to my GF..lol gd work