Oct 04 2009
Missing Her
Missing Her
Migs Rustia
Makes it real hard to cope
The great distance between us
Makes me start to lose hope
I can’t think I can’t breathe
I just cannot go on
Until she is once more
Cradled safe in my arms
Yeah, I miss her sweet smile
I miss her cute face
I miss her soft touch
And her gentle embrace
I miss spending time that time
On the phone with no end
I miss the sweet voice
Of my special best friend
Yeah I miss her, I need her
I’m in deep misery
Cause I miss who I am
Whenever she is with me
But though she is somewhere else
And we’re so far apart
I know just where she is
She’s right here in my heart…….
8)
Your poem is very beautiful. It actually sums up the way I feel about my bf. I don\’t see him all the time but I am always thinking about him and the times we have shared.
Awwwwhhh this is kwl (y)
How do I tell you, all that I feel? When I myself wonder \”is this all real?\” Emotions lie dormant, lost in the past, now they\’ve all surfaced, the current runs fast. I\’ve been swimming in a sea of regret, heading towards shore, as days turn to sunsets. I\’ve never allowed much love in my life, when I did it cut like a knife. I felt my heart bleed, and heard my heart break. But here I now stand, wiping cobwebs from my eyes, and picking up the pieces from my past full of lies. The sun rises just as it sets. The water is receding in my sea of regrets. Off in the distance I see a rainbow, I feel my heart string, as love begins to grow. You take a step towards me, and offer your hand. Two sets of footprints now lay in the sand. Will you be with me, with each new sunrise? And slide down the rainbow where the pot of gold lies? Will you take my hand in yours, and never lead me astray? Will you love me and need me with the close of each day?
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this is really cute i must say!
great site
hi migs my name is karla and i love thi s poem that you wrote and i want to know if you can write some more so i can read them to my class mates because we are learning about how to write poems and i wood like some examples from you and thank you if you do thank you again from karla ps. write some more plesae thank you
You will never know how much i miss you!!!!
this poem is the edxaced way i feel about my girlfreind and i miss u so very very much BROOKIE!!!!!!!!!! :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
That is a terrific poem. I can only see my girl about every other month. We live too far apart, but I always yearn for her. I pray one day I’ll be nearer.
i really liked migs poem but even more so the response of bborland.. if my ex would but ask me something like that I would melt like putty in his hands.. even after the hurt he has caused..
I really think so too=P I have been surfing around the internet for some time today, and its kinda hard to find something interesting to read on blogs=P Maybe thats because there are too much of those around =) But this place actually keeps catching my attention:P Great stories, and cool design ^__^. Ill be sure to give it more visits now =P
+1 for being original