Oct 23 2010

More than friends

Published by at 6:53 pm under Cute Love Poems

I love how you enchant me
Opening my eyes to see,
The one who’s always cared for me
I know now, you’re the key

Strong, loving and kind
Brave and true
Understanding my mind
And knowing what I do

Building a trust
Too strong for mere words
I allow what you must
But not the freedom of birds

A solid reality, in which we are one
A place where there is no where to run
Singing with the utmost joy
Because you’ve found that special boy

Gravity has no power
A spider turned flower.
Hope’s high, moods about
For no apparent reason, giving a shout.

For what its worth,
I shall declare
My mind is set
No feeling is as rare.

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7 responses so far

7 Responses to “More than friends”

  1. meghan222on 02 Feb 2012 at 3:38 am

    Ok I have nothing to say,but this: 21 5 stars and no comments,weird! 😀

  2. pixieon 02 Feb 2012 at 1:26 pm

    Yeah. You guys don’t love me 🙁
    xD Lol.
    I do appreciate commentary, by the way. For anyone reading.

  3. StarfireBluestoneon 13 Jul 2012 at 11:05 am

    beautifully written poem, good rhythm
    not sure if your happy and taking on poetic license
    but i hope its true for you
    and that someday i may find the same happiness in love

  4. pixieon 13 Jul 2012 at 11:23 am

    Thank you for reading ;D
    And I’m sure you’ll find what you’re searching for someday.
    Good luck.

  5. <3Pretty_Gurl_Swag<3on 01 Aug 2012 at 12:17 am

    This poem is a cutie >:D
    It made me smile lol <3
    I think yu did an awesome job 😛

  6. pixieon 01 Aug 2012 at 12:42 pm

    Thank you for the kind comment!

  7. <3Pretty_Gurl_Swag<3on 02 Aug 2012 at 7:38 am

    Wellllll, i tryyyyyy lol
    Yur welcome!!
    Yu deserved it <#3

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