Oct 23 2010
More than friends
I love how you enchant me
Opening my eyes to see,
The one who’s always cared for me
I know now, you’re the key
Strong, loving and kind
Brave and true
Understanding my mind
And knowing what I do
Building a trust
Too strong for mere words
I allow what you must
But not the freedom of birds
A solid reality, in which we are one
A place where there is no where to run
Singing with the utmost joy
Because you’ve found that special boy
Gravity has no power
A spider turned flower.
Hope’s high, moods about
For no apparent reason, giving a shout.
For what its worth,
I shall declare
My mind is set
No feeling is as rare.
(37 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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Ok I have nothing to say,but this: 21 5 stars and no comments,weird! 😀
Yeah. You guys don’t love me 🙁
xD Lol.
I do appreciate commentary, by the way. For anyone reading.
beautifully written poem, good rhythm
not sure if your happy and taking on poetic license
but i hope its true for you
and that someday i may find the same happiness in love
Thank you for reading ;D
And I’m sure you’ll find what you’re searching for someday.
Good luck.
This poem is a cutie >:D
It made me smile lol <3
I think yu did an awesome job 😛
Thank you for the kind comment!
Wellllll, i tryyyyyy lol
Yur welcome!!
Yu deserved it <#3