Jul 07 2011
My 5″ blade
These cuts I am conceiving,
is proof that I am grieving,
I see no other way,
my life has turned to gray,
I hide in the shade,
with my 5inch blade,
cutting deeper and deeper,
just for her,
my wounds wont heal,
’cause I always feel,
like I was already dead,
are you ok everybody said,
but I know they never cared,
the tears I have shared,
have driven me forward,
closer and closer to the medical ward,
wishing I could die,
just to end this devastating lie.
This post was submitted by Jason Kerr.
I really like the power and emotion you put into this, it’s really good. I think it would be even more amazing with a little work done to its rhythm, not to put you down I think this poem is great and I look forward ot more of your work, I’m sorry for the pain you must’ve felt to write this.
great job……….is this poem based on reality?????
yes trisha its true but its not a 5 inch blade its a razor blade
so ” the girl” really broke your heart huh?????
she used to me to get out of a category know that i liked her
so you still like her????
[email protected]…..i like talking as i dont have any BEST FRIENDS….feel free to e-mail……i mean i have friends but not besties….. ^_^
this is really good.