Love Poems & Poetry

Jul 07 2011

My 5″ blade

These cuts I am conceiving,
is proof that I am grieving,
I see no other way,
my life has turned to gray,
I hide in the shade,
with my 5inch blade,
cutting deeper and deeper,
just for her,
my wounds wont heal,
’cause I always feel,
like I was already dead,
are you ok everybody said,
but I know they never cared,
the tears I have shared,
have driven me forward,
closer and closer to the medical ward,
wishing I could die,
just to end this devastating lie.

This post was submitted by Jason Kerr.

(4 votes, average: 4.75 out of 5)

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8 Responses to “My 5″ blade”

1. # Justaboyon 08 Jul 2011 at 4:35 am

   I really like the power and emotion you put into this, it’s really good. I think it would be even more amazing with a little work done to its rhythm, not to put you down I think this poem is great and I look forward ot more of your work, I’m sorry for the pain you must’ve felt to write this.

2. # Trisha Runelon 08 Jul 2011 at 10:54 am

   great job……….is this poem based on reality?????

3. # Jason Kerron 08 Jul 2011 at 10:56 am

   yes trisha its true but its not a 5 inch blade its a razor blade

4. # Trisha Runelon 09 Jul 2011 at 5:06 am

   so ” the girl” really broke your heart huh?????

5. # Jason Kerron 09 Jul 2011 at 1:10 pm

   she used to me to get out of a category know that i liked her

6. # Trishaon 11 Jul 2011 at 12:57 pm

   so you still like her????

7. # Trishaon 11 Jul 2011 at 12:59 pm

   [email protected]…..i like talking as i dont have any BEST FRIENDS….feel free to e-mail……i mean i have friends but not besties….. ^_^

8. # xxPlagueRatxxon 09 Oct 2011 at 8:37 pm

   this is really good.

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