Jun 26 2011
My Gravity
It’s early in the morning and I wake from a bad dream. My first thought is of you, and how we make a good team.
Thoughts of you, fight the darkness. I knew always that our love was true.
When I’ve had a terrible day and the weather is bad. You replace it with determination and a smile. If it weren’t for you my heart would be sad and it wouldn’t beat for awhile.
When I’m tired your love gives me the strength I need. I love you and you know it’s guaranteed. Your my gravity, you keep me from floating away. With you my heart will aways be okay. I stay rooted on the ground all because of this amazing girl I found.
When I struggle in life and I’m almost completly gone, you pull me back down to earth, and set me down on my lawn. Your my angel from above, and you fill my heart full of love.Your my amazing girlfriend you see.
When I struggle in life and yet stay standing its you, not me. Because your my true love, My Gravity.
i loved this very much. wouldve liked it more if u deviated from ur normal writing style to make it easier to find the rhymes.
ur ending was sweet. the title was cute, made me very excited to read the poem.
overall, nicely done.
That is a really nice done I like it so much
learn how to spell YOU’RE! 👿
Oh, ffs, fuck off, edddy. Seriously.