Jun 25 2011

My hearts Broken gaze

Published by at 12:40 pm under Heartbreak Poems

My heart was strong and brave, it was golden and beautiful and I always gave.

Then you left me, and I must have took you for granted, now my hearts broken, twisted and slanted.

You told me you loved me you said I was sweet.
You said I was cool, smart, even neat.

The worst part is I believed you and I don’t know why, because now I see why you left me, because I’m just a simple guy.

I trusted my heart with the task of loving you. but I guess it wasn’t meant to be, for us two.

Now that your gone I’m all alone and lost, and I paid the price when I told you I loved you. Oh, if I’d only known the cost.

I see now that that my hearts gaze is broken, If it hadn’t been for the small amount of love still in my heart, today I never would have woken.

People call me depressed and lonely they say I’m going through a phase. When they ask me whats wrong I reply. ” My hearts broken gaze.”

This post was submitted by Josiah Goodman.

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2 Responses to “My hearts Broken gaze”

  1. pixieon 25 Jun 2011 at 6:09 pm

    this seemed somehow clumsy
    it was disorganized and confusing
    but that only serves to intrigue the reader
    where, at the end, everything falls into place very neatly and elegantly
    i was pleasantly surprised

  2. sunny choion 30 Jun 2011 at 2:18 am

    Aww bbg dats 🙁 just email be if ya need. Love is evil spell it backwords E-V-O-L

    YOU WERE OBVIOUSLY TO GOOD FOR DAT MAN WHORE. I CAN TELL YOU’RE A SEXY GAL DON’T LET ANY GUY BRING YOU DOWN :love: :kiss:

    Add me on facebook for love advice: Sunny Choi
    I’m hear for all of you gals that ever got their heart broken by a man xxxx

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