Jun 26 2011

My own sun

Published by at 12:51 am under Love Poems for Your Girlfriend

The sun rises, the sun sets.
Time passes,yet my heart never forgets.
I lie awake, thinking of love.
Because I know the sun shines on you from above.
The sun rises, the sun sets.
Your beauty captures me, in golden nets.
The sun rises, the sun sets.
I swing caught in your beauty’s trap, and entranced by our meeting.
For the last time we embraced, my heart stopped beating.
The sun sets, the sun rises.
My love for you is far and wide, it never ceases to surprise.
An eagle may soar distant and high, but love’s wings may takes higher than any others in the sky.
The sun sets, the sun rises.
You eyes, miraculous and dark, yet deep. I see their gorgeous gaze even in my sleep.
I love you now and forever, I think your special and I know your clever.
I love you Ialways will.
Your beauty alone makes others stand still.
The sun rises, the sun sets ; and the sun sets, the sun rises.
The sun is ours, and it will always be, the thing that brought you to me.
It brings warmth and happiness when there is none, it can transform dull into fun.
It kisses our skin lightly and when it appears, often later arrives a smile and a few tears.
Now listen up for I have a secret and it is for only your ears.
I have my very own sun.
She shines and brings wwarmth and a smile is nearly always behind her arrival. I call her amazing, and compliment her every chance i get.
I guard her jealously, because our fingers are suppose to fit.
She is a treasure to me, richer than gold.
She is unique and only those with open hearts can purely see.
She is my very own sun that I look for light in dark times.
For her I will always write poems and ryhme.
Because the sun rises and the sun sets, and shes all mine.

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6 responses so far

6 Responses to “My own sun”

  1. adminon 26 Jun 2011 at 12:54 am

    very good
    *5 stars* :woot:

  2. anonymousson 26 Jun 2011 at 12:56 am

    this is pretty awesome. Im jealous!!!! why didnt i think of this? xD

  3. Josiah Goodmanon 26 Jun 2011 at 1:12 am

    haha thanks!

  4. pixieon 26 Jun 2011 at 7:46 am

    this is what ive been looking for. im impressed, i must admit
    ur meaning was clear. feeling were easily related to
    it was lyrical and easy to read – very whimsical
    since endings r important to me, ill add that urs was very cute

  5. marcon 13 Sep 2011 at 1:38 pm


  6. Buseon 18 May 2012 at 5:14 am

    Hey Yu Liang, you have some really AMAZING wednidg shots!!! This pre-wedding series blows me away. I agree with you 100% nothing can go wrong with a beautiful day and a talented photographer like you. Keep up the good work!

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