Mar 30 2014

None to Give

Published by at 8:10 am under Break Up Poems

Rejection hurts the worst of all
Low self-esteem caused hurtful fall
With careless words, an empty bed
A lonely heart knows only dread.

Consider what you’ve done to me,
Forgotten when I’d begged you be
less careless and less self involved
More problems caused when none were solved

It’s not just you I’m speaking of,
It’s all those guys devoid of love
With none to spare and none to give
What lonely lives those guys must live.

I never meant a thing to you,
no matter how much I might do,
and so what’s left for me to say:
“I killed myself for you today.”

This post was submitted by pixie.

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6 Responses to “None to Give”

  1. Dennison 10 Apr 2014 at 3:59 am

    Great stuff Pixie. For some reason these line really struck me in the heart:
    “Rejection hurts the worst of all
    Low self-esteem caused hurtful fall
    With careless words, an empty bed
    A lonely heart knows only dread.”

    I really love your work, it’s always refreshing to read. Even the stuff that bleeds hurt.

  2. pixieon 10 Apr 2014 at 3:56 pm

    I’m glad you enjoy reading my poetry :3

  3. adminon 12 Apr 2014 at 7:22 am

    great words pixie
    you keep getting better day by day =]

  4. pixieon 12 Apr 2014 at 8:13 am

    Long time no see! :p
    Thanks for the kind comment :3

  5. adminon 19 Apr 2014 at 11:59 am

    yes pixie, I know that!
    Life events had been keeping me busy away from the webs.
    Got a bit of break now so have been touching up the website.
    Upgraded the site software yesterday, hopefully nothing is broken because of that

  6. pixieon 19 Apr 2014 at 1:14 pm

    Good to have you back :3

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