Dec 04 2006

Old Sad Story

Published by at 5:11 pm under Heartbreak Poems

Old Sad

I loved her,
I really did,
But it’s an old sad story,
That I live.
How can I ask for more,
From this beautiful woman I adore?
I trapped her and kept her down,
How can I ask for her to be around?
Out of these eyes,
I could not see.
How can I live,
With this part of me?
She means so much,
Yet so little does it show,
But there’s nothing left,
Except the words over the phone.
I am no more man,
Than I am a child,
As I watch these dreams,
Crumble to a pile.
Now she’s gone.
She has left.
Now my heart,
Starves to death.
Misery comes strong,
With this lesson I’ve learned.
So many times in my life,
I have taken the wrong turn.
One day I hope,
This butterfly with come home,
As for now,
I am left all alone.
I miss her more,
Then what these rythmes could say,
For her heart,
I could not pay.
I loved her,
I really did,
But it’s an old sad story,
That I live.

– Garry Brand

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35 responses so far

35 Responses to “Old Sad Story”

  1. Crystalon 26 Jan 2007 at 7:51 pm

    That was so sad am sorry but thats life and life sucks we all pray that it will be ok at t he end but i hate the fact ill never get to be in love am not ugly but i have this fear of men sinces i have be hurt by the one man i trust the most my father i was just a kid how could he touch me in those ways i trusted him anyways it going to be ok

  2. Alexandrea smithon 08 Feb 2007 at 11:08 am

    this poem made me cry inside with the pain that i once had i never really knew that guys can be really seniftive about love and heartbreak i know that guys are like in love with girls but not like your story well thanks for sharing your story and email with more please

  3. Cathryn Pageon 06 Mar 2007 at 4:56 pm

    This made me cry.
    I wish my boyfriend loved me the way you love this woman, it\’s truly beautiful. xx

  4. ggon 29 Mar 2007 at 11:40 am

    i really love the old sad story :sigh

  5. Melissaon 05 May 2007 at 10:20 pm

    Wow, you really have it. It touched me so much to the point i cried. Its not everyday you read a poem from a Man telling his feelings! I give you huge props, and keep writing!!

  6. amandaon 02 Jul 2007 at 1:48 pm

    I was lookin for a poem to relate to my miss hap that happened last night. Your poem made me break down in tears!!! I can hardly write this right now!!!! :cry :sigh

  7. Claudiaon 24 Jul 2007 at 12:34 am

    :sigh I love this poem it is really touching I just wish that he would love me the way you loved your woman. Thanks for sharing keep writing.

  8. Help Me Escape The Painon 18 Sep 2007 at 1:27 am

    ya man…i kno exactly how you feel…the one i truly loved walked out on me…but i cant stop loving her. its like we were meant to be but she just cant see it. she loved me dearly to. i just hope she comes back and stays. :cry

  9. joselyn valladareson 20 Nov 2007 at 11:18 am

    :cry wow i can tell you really loved her!!
    im so sorry but it\’s life and just count on god 2 take this pain away he loves you and he wantz 2 let you of dat!! no matter wat she did 2 u but he loves u sometimez u may think itz 2 late but itz not its just a lil thing we call love and love is pain not heaven on earth(expect sometimez)!! [B]null[/B] HE LOVEZ YOU :zzz :p 🙂 😉 😡

  10. Tanyaon 29 Nov 2007 at 6:00 am

    This poem is amazing, here you have a man, not only expressing his feelings but admitting to his faults. Its something I wish my husband would understand, I wish he could see, maybe he\’s eyes will open when I leave.

    Your an excellent writer, don\’t ever stop!

  11. kriztenon 10 Dec 2007 at 3:36 am

    i truly feel astary from your poem.. i mean, my boyfriend admitted that he still love her x gf.. does it tears me up inside,, just like you… you still love her.. but, if i time you\’ll found someone new.. please just leve the past behind… coz\’ it truly hurts to a waman hen she knew that your still inlove with your past, and your just using her to help you move-on.. damn!!! it hurts alot… :cry

  12. Desireeon 28 Jan 2008 at 5:04 pm

    I no wat ur goin through…this poem reminds me ALOT of wat i went through…and i feel ur pain :cry :cry :cry

  13. hhhon 18 Feb 2008 at 8:01 am

    :sigh :sigh :sigh

  14. Rebekah...xon 03 Mar 2008 at 3:47 pm

    OMG..i was in tears reading this litraly i didnt realise that lads actually felt this way! it was so touching :cry i love my ex the way you love this girl if only he felt the same:cry..x

  15. Sharzon 17 Apr 2008 at 8:26 am

    wow this actually made me cry :cry its a really great poem

  16. Anthony Con 24 Apr 2008 at 12:48 am

    Guy here to, I think that I am going through the same thing that you did. I took advantage of all the things that my wife has done for me over the years, and now we have drifted apart. So I am stuck here alone, I never really feel like eating, I cant sleep without thinking of her, because I know she is not here with me. I know that the problems that we are having now is because I never let her know what she meant to me and I never let her know how much I appreciated everything she did. But now I think it is to late……I am stuck with knowing that all the hurt I am feeling is all my fault.

  17. marcia on 26 May 2008 at 7:55 am

    ive never loved sum1 the wa i loved him, heartbrake is more painfull than death of sumone you love omg im still mourning and i hope ill be ok that bastard didnt dezev me :cry

  18. marciaon 26 May 2008 at 8:05 am

    :cry :cry :cry heartbreak is more painfull than death good luck on getting your lifes tgethter again to those wif broken hearts like me

  19. Lisaon 08 Jun 2008 at 1:24 am

    That was beautiful, heartbreaking but beautiful.

  20. broken hearted personon 13 Jun 2008 at 2:24 pm

    Dam this is a beautiful poem I just wish my man would write these kind of things . He is so possesive and evil. he hurts me so much even tough he tells me he loves me its so hard to beleive and I am so ready to leave after 16 years

  21. onesadguyon 27 Jun 2008 at 1:26 am

    wow this poem describes exactly how i feel. every line hit the spot and it made me cry. wonderful poem, well written

  22. onesadguyon 27 Jun 2008 at 1:27 am

    wow this poem describes exactly how i feel. every line hit the spot and it made me cry. wonderful poem, well written

  23. onesadguyon 27 Jun 2008 at 1:28 am

    wow this poem describes exactly how i feel. every line hit the spot and it made me cry. wonderful poem, well written

  24. rubyon 09 Jul 2008 at 6:41 am

    i hope a man would right me ths poem.

  25. MANISHAon 15 Jul 2008 at 6:04 am


  26. jordhanon 25 Jul 2008 at 4:43 am

    i find this poem to be so relating and so beautiful, like something i\’ve never heard before.
    so much meaning behind it that i feel, it\’s almost unbareable.

    i\’d like to ask you, if i could use this poem as a set of lyrics for a song. of course, all credit would be given to you for the lyrics.
    if this might be even considerable, please email me.
    [email protected]

  27. arely beltranon 28 Feb 2009 at 9:23 am

    :cry :sigh :upset
    its a sad story … i had this guy that i love but he is taken and i thought he loved me but it turns out to be he wasw never meant to be..someday he will look back and say that girl really did love me so that sotry realtes to me[B]null[/B][I]null[/I][EMAIL]null[/EMAIL][EMAIL]null[/EMAIL][B]null[/B][URL=null]null[/URL]

  28. arely beltranon 28 Feb 2009 at 9:27 am

    that a sad story :sigh :upset :cry
    sprry wta u been goign trhoug i had this guy who i though he loved me but it turns out to be he didnt so he is now gone but i still love him ..
    he one day would turn back and saud that girl really did love me

  29. pjayon 25 Mar 2009 at 4:25 am

    i missed my girl too,
    but she\’ll never be mine again.. :sigh :sigh :cry

  30. Durgeshon 22 Jul 2009 at 11:51 am

    Its a poem seems written for me and it has tuched my heart, she not listening to me please pray for me I love her so much.. :cry

  31. Misty-Day Elizabethon 02 Aug 2009 at 11:18 pm

    Oh, my God. I love this! It\’s so sad. Good work(:

  32. jerryon 15 Dec 2009 at 12:51 pm

    i read this and it just makes me realize how much i miss her i still have dreams of her hurtin me to where it ruins my day i loved her and she left prego. hen after not talkin to me her sis texts me to let me know it aint my kid and that she is movin with him great xmas present. she told me she wanted to get pregnant i didnt know she met by some1 else.. now im torn up i cant enjoy other girls company and i cant get over her. i beg god that i do cause i hate and love her more than anything and to any1 that does this to ur spouse can go to hell no1 deserves this :cry for any1 that this has happened to u cant trust just any1 hold ur heart back until ur sure

  33. Shwetaon 03 Mar 2010 at 9:56 pm

    :cry Beautiful poem. [B]null[/B]

  34. christinaon 22 Aug 2010 at 2:17 am

    i am sooooo sorrry i really hope it gets better for you hunnn !!!!!!

  35. iwait4you4everon 30 Sep 2010 at 10:27 am

    Damn Damn Damn ::wiping tears away:: God I pray this is how my ex feels about me…..

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