Apr 21 2011

Our last dance

Published by at 12:51 am under Sad Love Poems

take me to the floor
twirl me ’round and ’round
im watching u
im crying
this cannot be goodbye
i need u like the air i breath
u were always strong, plz dont cry
im weak, im selfish
i dont deserve u
thats what i never really understood, i think
i thought…
i thought HE was the one who loved me
wasnt he the one who cared?
though it was u who came to my rescue
after heartbreak
he left, u see
he left
but u stayed
i hurt i, i betrayed u, i deceived u
yet still u were by my side
is this what love is?
fond thoughts?
warm hugs?
or is love a heavy passion
a flame that burns ur soul?
all i know is i dont want u to go
so twirl me once more
dont twirl me near the door
i need this
a chance to explain
to wash ur pain away
listen to me!
listen to me plz
u think ive given up
im not dead yet, let me try
ill win u over,
just watch me
as i lean in for a kiss
to remind u what we had
it was magical, fantastical
a tale of love was true
but as i lean over, u lean away
and send us crashing down
neither gets up
we stare and stare
our eyes locked, no-one there
and u say, “dear ballerina,
it seems there shall be no more ballrooms for us”

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5 responses so far

5 Responses to “Our last dance”

  1. ur fluffy bunny lolon 21 Apr 2011 at 7:59 am

    wow…..im speechless……gd poem…a long 1 but gd…..love u…. :love:
    keep up the gd work…..xXxXxXx

  2. pixieon 21 Apr 2011 at 3:18 pm

    thank you so much

  3. aveira pallon 21 Apr 2011 at 5:22 pm

    your poems are awesome…just woww..!!!
    i do not even have words to say..!!!!i really love your poems..
    u put life in all ur poems..make em’ alive..!!!! :love:

  4. ur fluffy bunny lolon 21 Apr 2011 at 6:09 pm

    just to let u know….she is taken 4 m8….lol…no offence b tht…keep up the gd work pix….love u… :love: 🙂

  5. pixieon 21 Apr 2011 at 6:23 pm

    thank u so much, aveira. writing about my thoughts really helps me get through. glad u like my poems.
    thx for commenting, “bunny”

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