Apr 21 2006
Painful Memories
Painful Memories
Feel the blowing leaves and reeds
Lying on our backs in that field
Felt like we were the only humans
Banished in the middle of no where
Staring at the thousands of stars
Feeling the crisp night prickle my spine
Feeling your heart beat so close to mine
And repeatedly saying the same three words
"I love you" is what you told me
Before we promised we would be together
Forever and ever, you have my heart
And I could feel your warm embrace
And now I’m here, all alone
Wondering what I’ve done so wrong
Watching my whole life before my eyes
And feeling the cruel world crash down on me
Can’t you see what pain you’ve caused?
Can’t you see I’m dying…
-Laurie Price
(1 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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Omg your peom rocks!,i write poems to = D but mine arent as good at this,yours has lots of detail and stuff,mines mostly feelings,…anyways love your poem=D=D
i adore poetryand love poems really touch my heartpoetry means so much more when you have experienced the feelings that are being described in the poem
its alrytt a suppose but it aint very sad yah need more memories in it lol cyah x
Hey, I found this link. Cool poem =D
omg ur poem its wkd, i love reading poems…. thts all i have to say, but just remember tht it weeeel gd 🙂
Your poem rocked it made me cry!!!!!!!!
Your poem rocked it made me cry!!!!!!!!
YO POEM WAS AWESOME 🙂
OMG…THIS IS THE BEST POEM I\’V HAVE EVER HEARD. I WRITE STUFF LIKE THIS ALL THE TIME
ROX ON
ever sick!
i so feel this poem. i just found out that my bf is about to break up with me when he gets back in town and reading this poem just brought back every single memory we have ever shared. keep \’em flowin.
well the peom stated out slow, but the ending really picked it up.You have alot of potential!!
gosh!!! nakakaiyak, feel na feel mu ung pain.
I myt nt knw u..but smhw the pain this poem paints brings to me a state of familiarity..Keep the rhythm of werds ever flowing..
God Bless dear
:cry i no exactly wat yr sayn cuz thats how i feel with my first love now hes back i dont no wat to do 😕
:grin This is a great poem!!! 8)
The poem means alot more wen u have gone through those feelings.. and just recently i have .. love the poem keep em comeing
😕 what the hell is that
this poem is what it feels like to have that person just up-n- leave w/o a motive. i love it. and it sux livin life like that every day, bkut all u can do is love them and one day they love u bkacc. ~much love to the person who wrote this~
This poem is so good. Ive just gone through exactly what you\’ve just talked about. He sed he loved me and then just up\’t and left! He says he loves me too much.. is that possible?? 😕
:sigh
I think u\’ ve been there and thats why u can write so trueful, i think u did a excellent work u probably got famous already so,no need to tell you u will
i totally know what you\’re saying in this poem and i\’m only 13 years old… my boyfriend and i broke up just over 13 months ago (lucky number 13) and i really miss him… he was my first true love… and i haven\’t been with anyone since then… I loved him and he tore me apart… Keep the poems coming, they\’re amazing!
my ex was cheating on me with my best friend :cry
remains me of something that happend to me
Hey love this Poem it is excatly how i feel i was with the love of my life and then he was gone that was preatty much a year ago now he has a kid on the way and it still hurts to think about it
good one but me n my guy bin 2geda 4 2years on and off i no how to deal wit it now 😉
i kno exactly how u feel cuz i met this guy and fell in love with him he is my one true love but he tells everyone else he loves me but wont tell me so i dont kno how he really feels
I luv this prom becuz it remind me about my ex boyfriend he left me for another girl. he was my first love :cry :cry
thanks for your comments everyone 🙂 just to warn you i\’ve seen this poem on other internet sites so just want you all to know that this is the original and thanks for your support!
omg that poem totally describes me i was dumped once and when we got back together i broke up with him which was the biggest mistake in my lifr cuz i love him and now dont know what to do :cry 😕 :sigh
i totally love ur poem its exactly me…….. :cry :sigh 😕
i totally love ur poem its exactly me…….. :cry :sigh 😕
its very touching it reminds me about my heart break :cry
.i remember the day that my boyfriend break-up with me.it\’s really painful for my part that after all of the love,care and trust that i gave he just left me with these shattered pieces of my heart.he told me that he love me and he will never ever break up with me.nor he will never ever tell a lie to me.but when we brok-up.he told me all the truth.that after all these times.his heart only belongs to one girl.he [B]cheated[/B] on me!!and til now im not yet moving on.for only one reason.[U][B]i am still waiting for him to come back to me[/B][/U].still waiting for him to love me again. :sigh
:cry i love dis poem i can totally get it i went thought the samething w my ex he broke up with me for some chick and well i still havent gotten over him its been 3 years i think :cry i really miss him and dis is something that reminds me of him even more great job on dis poem keep up the great work bye!! :grin
[B]U R SO RIGHT[/B]
I SERIOSLY LOVE THIS POEM, i felt the same way when my boyfriend left me. i loved him so much all i think about iz him and no one else in dis world he knows how i really feel. he told me that he loved mee and want to get back together but i sad no no more :eek 🙂 :grin 8) :p :sigh :zzz :upset :eek :roll 😕 :cry 🙁
Very good poem, this somehow calmed me, knowing im not the only one that is hurt from and ex love. I miss my EX-GF, I hope one day she will find me again. I\’m at the verge of giving up, but for somereason your words moved me. Now I\’m going to wait and keep putting myself through torture of being her friend
:cry :upset 😡 :sigh :roll 😕 :eek :cry :cry :cry
this is one …… i dont know if this is happenin.may be i deserve this agony this pain.may be u can call me a loser. yes i lost. lost wht u call life. for what we wait 4 our whole lives.a love . i got and i lost, what u call love.
just think————–
now i know its value,i did love but my ways sent her away.even a loser has his chance. i think i am over reacting.. but isnt it agonizin that the persons not there with whom u always were. i really want to see her smile again.i just wanna see her laugh cause of me..
i gave her what she desired , a peaceful life. without me. i just love her. and 4 her sake i wont come back. but what when i need her the most????
what when i cant see myself with her when she has tears in her eyes??????
how to feel when i am addicted to her???? may be i dont make any sense but i cant help it. i have gone crazy without her.
i just make one sense (((((((((((((([B]love is life[/B])))))))))))
my love 4 her was always true.
its really difficult to stay without u dear :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
now when i desire u the most.
no….. dont u think i am dependant on u. i am goin far away from u so that u can live in peace.. and i may rest in peace.i want u outta ma head. i want to live. i m goin crazy. i want u to go away 4rm ma life. but it seems u hv become ma shadow :cry :cry :cry :cry i love u
I LOVE THIS POEM. IT HELPED ME DEAL WEN MY EX LEFT ME, STILL A LIL HEARTBRIOKEN BUT WE ARE FRIENDS AND IT KILLS ME :sigh
damn man. my ex promised me the we would be together no matter wat…we planed our whole life together…and now things just fell apart. i wish i never came to it. i feel for ya man.
Ay Munerinjou, i feel the same way right now, i only want her and only her, but i cant help but think of all the bad things she has done to me. but am crazy bout my ex, its unbelieveable.
[B]I LOVE YOU ANIL KOHLI BUT YOU DITCHED ME AND RUIN MY LIFE. I DON\\\’T TRUST ANYBODY NOW.[/B][I]Jaan you ditched me. why you loved me so much? i still love you but will never come back to you[/I] :cry
heart touching sensation feeling toomuch lonely pls come back pls :cry
this poem is the same thing im goin though i love this girl and i told her i always would no matter what but then she gets a bf and it breaks my heart and i dont know if i should love her forever it just breaks my heart to think of her
:sigh . but life is love so let love and be love!..
:cry you gave me my dream and took it away from me the only thing i wanted from u was ur love but u had 2 listen 2 those voices that ur friends told u those mean comments u listended 2 them and thats y i wil no longer b urs plz add me i am hreat broken [email protected]
i love this poem, but when i think of my ex i just want to cry, becouse he did so nice things for me and he made me fel in love whit him, he liked me before i liked him, he said he would nevre leave me, he said we 2 4 ever, but look now he dumpt me and forgat me and its only gon 2 weeks sence he said i love you, and sence he dumpt me :sigh
but you got to move on to, but i stil love him, and i hate my self 4 doing that.
gosh this is sooooo true but men aint worth the time cause its hard to find one you could hold 🙁
))heart broken((
When i think of you it\’s something special it cannot be described,yet again i remember the times you said you loved me and needed me and all of it was a lie but there you had me all hypnotized with those beautiful brown eyes;and the sweet enriching toxic aroma of your own colonge and those sweet warm kisses that you would give me that just with one touch you blown me up to paradise but twice the entice
i made you my everything but once you left i was nothing how can someone make you feel so right? but then again it\’s all a lie you weren\’t there to hear my cries at night from paradise i fell hard to the depths of the unknown without having you to catch me but someday u\’ll pay twice the price,remise the butterflies i had,that had your name incised but all i got was a unaprized deny it was so cruel of you and i was so surprise. i desperatley called out your name but no one came i cant believe you did me so wrong but i still was sprung.everything inside of me broke into tiny pieces it looked like a cyclone had overblown through but once again despise the pain you had me looking for my missing pieces to complete the puzzle of my heart knowing i couldn\’t because you had stolen a part.
i was blind from love and all i was to you was a game and you were the player now you\’d found someone to treat you right but i still sit here tonight holding your picture very tight close to my heart and think of you and the love i thought i once knew
But thank god i waited for something new; and instead of this pain my heart was going through i found something true but it surely wasn\’t you ! :roll
,,I HATE HIM,, he only use me as a pastym b\’couz his gf broke w/ him,, i thought he really love me couz his kind,sweet and thoughtful,,!! 🙁 :cry i beleive him, i even care about him all the time but he does\’nt care,,,! i thought that he is true to me went he told me that he loves me..!! recently i discover he and the girl was become on again but he did\’t tell me,, i just discover it all by my self and the worse thing he do is choosing that girl rather than me,,the girl always insulting him but he still choose that bicth,,!!!!! I HATE BOTH OF THEM,,,!!!!!!! 🙁 🙁
dude….i can so totally relate to this poem…
:cry :cry :sigh :cry :sigh :cry :sigh :cry :cry :cry my girl broke it off wit me i loved her so much this brings bac the horrible memory i still love her so much tho :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
:cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
that was good well my man just left me and i still think of him
:cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry my boyfriend of 2 years left me and i still love him . :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
:cry Im Da Same way my girlfriend broke up wit me cuz she said things wont work out betwween me n u so i cried :cry :sigh :upset
i loved my ex with my heart && i still love him. he meant everything to me. He gave up on me, && left me there in tears, && h kept tellin me that he liked me, but couldnt go back. And he always told me that, then a few days later, he tells me hes hanging out with girls, and that hes likin one, its like he was having fun stabbing my heart, everyday he hurts me ore && more, and yet i jus keep falin in deeper && deeper. i wish this pain would go away
its not worth Loving someone whom will nver love you back..
:sigh this poem hits me so hard. i really love it. me and my boyfriend just broke up and i was trying to make it work. i thought we would be 2gehter forever but i guess it wasnt true. i mean i know we were having problems but i wanted to work it out because i loved him so mcuh. i thought he loved me too but i guess not as much. anyway great poem
Hey, this peom is so good 8)
i have this pain in my stomach wen i see my ex boyfriend. i loved him so much still. but he\’s got his girl now, he still says hi to me but its hard to say hi back. when i want to be more than friends again. cuz me and had no problems, 😕 then he just sed to me \” we arent right for eachother. :upset
but if he reads this.. I still love you mathew 😉 🙂 please? can we make it happen again? love. x
:cry :eek i feel like thiis tooo :cry pluds i dont know what i\’v done?
&+ I really wish he would tell meeee. :cry 😕 🙁
nothing is worse than the pain you feel inside. unlike any pain else. there\’s no drug or methord to help it but time. and even that doesn\’t trully erase the pain. i love my boyf… my ex, thats so hard to say it make me break down and cry thinking that i may never see his smile again. wirse thing was he was also my best friend and it hurts when i go to sleep. oh how sweet my dreams are, every night they are of him. but when i wake, wen reality hits its the worse pain of all.
i lay awake at ni night waiting for him to call. and say i love you. but he doesnt call so im left all alone to cry.
wow, This is a touching poem. Like what Im going through. I feel Crushed. But i get by, Nobody cares if your Miserable, So whats the Point! U mose be happy. :sigh :sigh :sigh :roll 🙂
wow; datz really saddd….the worst parts is it brought me sadd memories of that special someonee* that iz so not at my side anymore; :sigh
I feel the same. Manisha I hope it is not the same ANIL KOHLI who broke my hart too. I know 2 others who got dumped the same way by a man with this name.
this poem is a good example of a guy that broke my heart he cheated on me and yet i still took him back a stupid mistake i made but when you love someone you do what you can to stay with him A,E,H you hurt me but i still love you and yet your still killing me inside i can never trust you R,J,A,P :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
This is just the way i feel. What is with ANIL KOHLI how many girls have to be hurt? I just pray it is not the same man Manisha because it sounds like the man i love too.
This is just wat i feel. Why does one have to hurt another so much. Manisha I hope it is not the same Anil Kohli I know. Why me????
Reading ths made me cry. What is it with ANIL KOHLI ?? Manisha i hope it is not the same man who has kiled my trust im men. Good luk to all who have been Hurt.
Your cheating hart broke my world in two.
Hey M..ani.. sha this sounds like the ANIL KOHLI i know !!!!
Join the queu.
He said he luved me but it was a lie never trust boys their. All the same fckn players 🙁
This poem is how i feel atm, i love it. I love the lovesick feeling i still have hope my love will be revived though :sigh
[B]that was really really sad keep your head up girls[/B]
[B]that was really really sad keep your head up girls[/B]
that is really good. it reminds me of me and my x but i have some one that can treat me better.
Hi thats so sad,My boyfriend name is anil kohli. Please confirm ,i hope thay are nt the sane
[B]null[/B]this poem made me sad!!! idk what to say i was left like this to… 😕 😕 :cry :cry :cry :cry 😕 🙁 🙁 🙁
This was wicked cute.
It almost made me cry.
I love it.
People should write like this more often these day.
OMGGGGG :grin
hi guys am 22yrs male from kenya.i have sumthng to tel you and i need a hepl from you guys.(i loved a gal for 14month we were together n last month i told my mumy to go to her home and purpose her to her parent n she accptd me for that also her parent accpt. on 8-05-2009 friday night she give me a cal n she told me to break the relationship?n she was my 1st love.and now am confused guys is help me through my email address [email protected] alot
well it\’s sad but it happens the girls left in tears alone she did nothing wrong its just the guy.it happened to me and its life he just wasnt the one.
3 days ago, i decided to walkaway from him. he was the only person i\’ve ever loved and cared so much b4. and i still love him alot right now. unfortunately, we fell apart. he\’s hurt me again and again. most of the time without the intention of doing so. leaving me in the midst of darkness. i am really feeling so sad. but what to do? i have no choice. i cannot go back to him because i don\’t think we\’re meant to be.
Petra, i love u. i always will.
I am in a relationship and we have both hurt each other. I do not seek help nor do I wish for simpathy. I simply want to give someone, anyone something to think about. I want to ask what type of love is this where no matter what we will never part. Even when we break up our hearts are bound together. I have more to say but no one wants to read a paragraph of a blog. So bye. She will see how much I love her. My name is Trae.
after i read this poem, my heart cried, till now
i thought me and him would be together forever but i guess i was wrong because he ended up breaking my heart and now im in milions of pieces i die every night because i look at his picture and cry knowing i lsot the man i love to another girl i just want to know how i screwed up becasue i know i messed us up. can anyone help me pleae i just need someone to tell me im right and that its all my fault please someone tell me how i screwed up
i lvoe your poem i write some too but mine arent any good my are just how i feel and others LOVE IT i just went trhough a heart break and is still broken-forever- so i LOVE YOUR POEM
can i have it on ma email plz
that just made a large rolling tear draw down across my face…..I was just looking for a love poem for my new bf, when i stumbled across this and it reminded my of the pain i still hold every day for jono, I fell deeply in love with him, we were together for about two years when he was suddenly taken away from me and had to go to prison, our relationship was destructive and we argued all the time but the love we felt was so deep, as one. It still confuses me now, should one fight for love that strong even if it means you were bad for eachother …. like cid and nancy there love killed them but at leaste they were together :/ Im trying to forget him. But I will always have you in my heart my darling xxxxxx
:sigh well someone at school caused me sum pain he was named saia
reminds me of the day when she left me, my world was just hell everyday. Watching her laugh with another man, just KILLS inside. It kills to know that im not the one making her happy everyday, i wish it were me. All i can do now is just sit and think of those better days. She cant see how broken i am inside, she watched me cry but she did was stare watching me die. yes everyday is really just hell. i want to sleep and wake up and forget abt her, FORGET EVERTHING. cant belive im still crying over her :sigh
keep writting, this is awesome (Y)
i love you Brandon you are the best thing in my life even though we are not together right now cuz you want a break i will wat for you
i feel the same way now its been . 4 months now of cry in what to dying in still not over. i wish could.
i really love the poem.. <3
oh…!!! u fell in love b4 ….so deeply, i cant believe ..! girls like u are still there…..aaaaaaaaaahhhhh..!! 🙁