Sep 22 2010
Pathetic Heartbreak
You warned me to never say goodbye,
Because of your irrational fear,
I told you not to worry,
And to never shed a tear.
But not so long after,
Thought I would never see the day,
That it wasnt me,
But it was you who walked away.
All I did was cry for hours,
I could never let you go,
Wishing you would come back,
Knowing it would never be so.
When I close my deep brown eyes,
I see yours just the same,
I weep at the thought,
The beautiful spark in them was a game.
I cherish a sacred photograph,
Your lips locked on mine,
How could it be,
The same lips are what made me cry?
Two perfect dimples,
One on either cheek,
Remembering when those were mine,
Makes my knees go weak.
Why am I so afraid to lose you,
Even though we’re not together?
I guess it’s because in my mind,
I know we’re meant for eachother.
You say the same thing to everyone,
Why do I waste my time,
On someone who for every girl,
Uses the same line?
The answer to that is easy,
Its because I love you, I really do,
But do you know how bad I wish,
Your love for me was true?
They say that I should move on,
But do they even know,
That for me its so impossible,
Impossible to let go.
So for now I’ll let you go your own way,
But please remember this my dear,
That if ever you need me,
Ever so pathetically I’ll be here.
(15 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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must say that it is an amazing poem .. just reminds of the line
“You broke my heart … and I love you with every piece of it”
i actualy am going through this right now, so this is an extremely touching poem
Thank you sooo much! I’m going through this right now, and its hard, so I know how you feel, Angel. :/
have you ever been through this cause Im only 12
Im only fourteen -.- .
Haha .
That’s really good. I’m going through this to some extent. It touched one of the pieces. Thank you for writing such an AMAZING poem 🙂 Bravo.
most of the time people will say that time heals all wounds but the only cure iz that one person. just hold in there cuz sum day you will find a new cure that will be there for the rest of your life keeping you warm and never be bored!
Amazing poem! Seriously. I loved the last line, it stuck with me. Very well written. I loved it.
Very touching and heartfelt. How bout this for last line…
And just remember this my dear
if you ever need me
f.u I won’t be here
I like that, haha.
Except to keep the poem based on reality, that wouldnt be true, :/ .
beautiful 🙂
Thank you so much (:
This poem is truly straight from the bottom of my heart. ?
* <3
I love this, i’m going through this right now and it’s really hard to even wake up in the morning and trying not to think, about him. This poem is really touching and I can honestly relate to it</3
Very well written(:
Thanx so much for sharing! Keep on writing; you’re really good!!!!!!!!!!!
😀
xoxo
This poem made me cry ;-( . I absolutely love it. I’m going through this as well.
This is a wonderful poem. The last line truly blew me away. Kudos to you.
My baby is famous! <3 I love your poem…it just breaks my heart, though. I love you!
my boyfriends broke up with me a month ago today and i still not handling it very welli cry all the time,have nightmares,and hopefull dreams ;-(
my friends say i should hate him,but i truely cant.
he’d freak out if ever he thought id leave him,but i told him i NEVER would.
together for a lil over 2years and he dumps me like that.
“i just wanna be friends”he wont say a word,wont even tell me the cause of it.
but no matter wat i will always love him and will always be there for him if he needs a shoulder to lean against
..i love this poem it made me cry,but i wont give up
Thanks everybody!
Allie – Thankyou! Its really hard to deal with :/
Pixie – Thanks! I love writing < 3
Scarlet – Awe, thankyou! It's not fun, I know.
Trent – Thankyou SO much! (:
Momma – < 3 Haha, thanks, ily too (:
Brittany – I'm sorry :/ . That's probably horrible, I was only with the person this is about for the summer, I can't even imagine what it would feel like after two years. I know exactly what that feels like though. 🙁
I can relate to this line so much.
“they say I should move on,
but do they even know,
that for me it’s so impossible,
Impossible to let go,”
the closing lines are awesome
Thank you (: !
man u r only 14????……AWESOME!!!!! 😀 ………..I CAN REALLY RELATE…..i remember when i got heartbroken…….. couldn’t stop the tears..for over a year …………but whatever happens happens for good…….but i still love him soooo much..it breaks my heart to even look at his face……… ;-(