Aug 19 2010

Perfect gone wrong

Published by at 8:40 pm under Break Up Poems

I remember the first time you held me in your arms,
the first time you said “i love you.” the first time our lips touched.
you were always so gentle and sweet. no matter how far we were you were always there for me through it all. i trusted you, i loved you, you promised me the world and thats what you gave me. i couldnt have asked for anything better.
so what happened to us? our perfect love was ended so quickly, so hurtfully..
everything came to an abrupt hault. my heart stopped and shattered.
last thing you told me was “i never want to talk to you again.”
i couldnt understand why this happened..we were so madly in love.
nothing could seperate us, i loved you and you loved me.
why cant i ever just be happy? why couldnt we stay perfect?
my questions shall never be answered.

This post was submitted by foreverx3ily.

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4 Responses to “Perfect gone wrong”

  1. christinaon 22 Aug 2010 at 2:19 am

    wow this poem was great but defff had me thinking and made me sadd cuz its soooooooo true about my exx and how muchhh i miss him!!!! ;-(

  2. Beccy-Roseon 28 Aug 2010 at 10:20 am

    This Poem is describing my life in every single . prospect and makes me aware of several life changing experiences .

  3. Michaelaon 12 Oct 2010 at 11:19 pm

    me and my boyfriend just broke up not too long ago.. we were perfect together. we were happy. we had trust. love. honesty. everything. we promised to always love one another.. to be there for each other. to be with each other through all the good.. and the bad. then.. it came all crashing down..this poem def made me cry. good writing.

  4. melissaon 16 Dec 2010 at 9:55 am

    this makes me think tbh coz ive just split up with my boyfriend and cant get over him :'( makes u wonder if they ever did love ya 🙁

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