Jun 26 2011

Please dont leave me

Published by at 1:32 am under Sad Love Poems

love, adoration, lust
like, desire, want
crave, hunger, must
depression, sadness, sorrow
despair, outrage, denial
hear, listen, comprehend
see, watch, observe

damn this
how am i supposed to explain this???
how i felt
the day he left me
on my knees

how am i supposed to make u understand
the way i felt when he rejected me
the way i begged him to stay
just dont leave me
not u

how am i supposed to make u understand
that when he walked out of that door
one step
two steps


that my life
and all i have, all i care for
fell apart

how am i supposed to get u to realize
that when i pleaded for mercy from him
i knew my mind would be lost if he left
he was the thread that kept me together

he was the sun to my rain
the smile to my frown
the warmth to my cold

he was the hug when i needed it
the kiss when it was all too much

he was the hand that picked me up
the one to tuck me in

now im begging u
to please just get what im saying
understand this
feel this
breath this

because i dont want to bear it alone

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12 responses so far

12 Responses to “Please dont leave me”

  1. anonymousson 26 Jun 2011 at 1:36 am

    oh my goshness, im a fan of urs!!

  2. Josiah Goodmanon 26 Jun 2011 at 1:44 am

    YOUR NOT ALONE! good poem. Very dramatic!

  3. pixieon 26 Jun 2011 at 7:28 am

    thanks, guys. i appreciate the support

  4. Sifferon 27 Jun 2011 at 3:34 pm

    Guys, i was told that I had to comment that this poem was shit; Who can guess who told me to comment it?

    P.S; Doing A Favour; This Poem = Shit, Not My Honest Opinion.

  5. Trisha Runelon 28 Jun 2011 at 12:18 pm

    gr8 work…..bye the way that guy is unlucky…heartbreaker!!!!

  6. pixieon 28 Jun 2011 at 12:36 pm

    haha. thanks, trisha
    appreciate the comment :p

  7. adminon 28 Jun 2011 at 1:05 pm

    Good poem but I think that you should not use chat lingo in poems like ‘u’ and ‘i’

    Also it is better to capitalize the 1st character where required e.g. in first word of new lines and poem title
    It will make the poems like more mature and professional and take away the teenasigh look from them 🙂

  8. pixieon 28 Jun 2011 at 2:04 pm

    Thank you, admin. I’ll be sure to do so from now on. :p

  9. Josiah Goodmanon 28 Jun 2011 at 6:27 pm

    Okay so I was set on believing this was your boyfriend but then I heard the line, “the one who tucked me in” and now I’m wondering, is this your dad? Because if it is I feel for you , because my dad went an hour ago to work and I still haven’t seen him SO im here if you need comfort. Just puttin it out there, I make a mean peanut butter sandwhich.

  10. pixieon 28 Jun 2011 at 6:30 pm

    Thank you, josiah. I’ll be sure to remember that. It’s not my father, though.

  11. Skyeraidon 22 Jul 2011 at 5:14 am

    So beautiful. Made me cry ;-( ;-(

  12. pixieon 22 Jul 2011 at 11:49 am


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