May 23 2009

Razor Blade Romance

Razor Blade Romance

He kisses her gently,
he pulls her close.
he whispers in her ear,
"i wont let you go."

Pulled back to the present,
as the past slowly fades,
what was done, is done,
yet the pain still remains.
Promises broken,
hearts shattered in two,
her love for this boy,
was all that she knew.

the pain was a blur,
but now it has become clear,
As clear as a single tear,
trickles down her face.

within her hand,
a blade is placed.
she pushes harder,
and welcomes the pain.

softly she whispers,
"My love shall remain."
As her blood began to trickle,
down her bruised vein,
As her pain slowly,
fades away.

from Ashley

(7 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)

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15 Responses to “Razor Blade Romance”

1. # ANAILISon 09 Jun 2009 at 10:45 am

   I LOVE DIS POEM CUZ IT\’S VERY DEEP.I LOVE DEEP POEMS CUZ IT\’S SO TRUE!! 8)

2. # mina marieon 23 Jun 2009 at 12:05 am

   this has happened to me before.
   i always wonder if it was the right choice.

3. # triciaon 15 Sep 2009 at 11:03 am

   this poem says alot…i went threw the same thing when it comes to the guy that i fell in love with then shatered me and i turned to the blade

4. # Shadowon 13 Nov 2009 at 2:18 pm

   I can feel your pain though your word and i can\’t say that I\’ve felt like that but i have witnessed my friends in pain,your poem has inspired me to think about this situation in a complete different way.well done 😉

5. # alyssaon 09 Dec 2009 at 10:33 pm

   uve titled this poem [razorblade romance] and wen i saw the title i said \”wait isnt tht one of the album titles from the band H.I.M.?\” and it is, i love this poem, did u use the lyrics from the song razorblade romance? nd yes the band takes one of the best songs from their others, and names the title after the song. but great poem!

6. # sabrinaxxthomason 17 Feb 2010 at 5:02 pm

   hmmm, this sure did get to me :/ congratsss…

7. # Natalieon 02 Mar 2010 at 4:07 pm

   I feel your pain darling. ive been there allt o any times before. deep stuff.

8. # sylvia on 10 May 2010 at 4:21 pm

   i fuck love your poem i can relate ..

9. # Scouton 28 Jun 2010 at 9:43 am

   Oh you don\’t know how close I\’ve come to a blade for the reason you have described in your poem…To know that all the pain would leave if I would just pierce my heart :sigh

10. # Pauloon 21 Jul 2010 at 7:24 pm

    I’ve been there but the other way around. I didn’t go through with it though. I’ve always wondered what wouldve happened if I did…

11. # deborahon 12 Aug 2010 at 12:22 am

    the ecstasy of it all the utter cathartic sense of release from the hindrances and the past, i feel the cuts

12. # pixieon 19 Nov 2010 at 1:55 pm

    Well, I can’t really say that I’ve actually been where you are, nor that I understand, but I reeeaaallly loved the poem.
    🙂 :whistle:

13. # DyingInsideon 23 Dec 2010 at 4:55 pm

    It’s impossible to really even leave you feedback. It was simply perfect. You have wonderful talents. 😀 Yet I was expecting a “boom,” ending..

14. # BrokenBabyon 23 Dec 2010 at 8:49 pm

    This was simply amazing.
    I’ve definitely been in your place.

15. # Drella28on 28 Dec 2010 at 11:23 pm

    thats beautiful ;-(

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