Jul 01 2011
Reality of True Love
Everyone is looking for love and happiness Nobody wants hate or pain
But as humans we have to understand
That there cannot be a rainbow without rain.
We hope that our missing half will come knocking on our door
That they will walk in and that’s it
But the reality is that true love is so much more than that
And to find the right match takes a plethora of rejection, blows, and hits.
In our lives we have to walk so many different paths
We have to try and fail and try again because at then end love is more than worth the sacrifice
And it’s so much better to try and fail than to fail to try
We have to open our eyes and realize that what matters is on the inside; such things are not reflected on a person’s looks, age, religion, gender, race, or size.
We look for love but at the end it just ends up finding us.
(4 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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The first stanza was, I think, very good. If you’d repeated it again at the end, it would’ve been a nice ending.
I like the title. Love the beautifully expressed emotions.
All in all, awesome :p
😀 thanks girl! Appriciate the feedback.
this was simply amazing and showed alot of insight!!!! keep it up! i will continue to read your works of art… they are like notes from a song… your words leap off the page and sing to me…
:woot: