Feb 12 2006

Sadness is raining from the stars

Published by at 12:50 am under Sad Love Poems

Today the sadness is raining from the stars
and like acid in us it burns some painful scars,
invisible, but they’re just in front of you,
our will is fading so we won’t know what to do.

Sea’s full of hope drying up in the sun,
when they’ve run dry , we’re beginning to stun,
the life it contains’, it starts to lose,
all feelings we have spend has been abused.

Thinking about these things all day and night,
you will see an with mistrust burning light,
we told to ourselves that we had good lives
and our hearts are embracing those lies.

Emptiness takes place for all of my lust,
my feelings were just blast away by these storm gust,
I’m walking through these mazes, they contain no emotion
they are all just places of my deep devotion.

Lazy bodies walking past so heartless,
changing their faces from brightness to darkness,
in the middle of this crowd, we were standing,
asking ourselves on what we are depending.

Emotions show you that you are alive,
but when they have fade they will leave out a stribe,
it’s put on your heart, should hiding your pain,
but when you’re hurt, the spots stay the same.

When they rip out your heart, they still have no idea,
they say the same words, that no one of us will hear,
we can remain friends, like we were before,
we try to react, but they will never adore.

We ask ourselves what it was that went wrong,
it is senseless, ’cause their emotions are gone,
like air to breathe we need, anyway we would decease,
we will love them forever, that’s why we’re so please.

We will still walk for them till the end of time,
stay awake the whole night to see, if they’re fine,
all we are expecting is this special smile,
that delights all our hearts once in a while.

-By MiSun

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11 responses so far

11 Responses to “Sadness is raining from the stars”

  1. Gueston 21 Feb 2006 at 3:07 pm

    [B]null[/B] i luv\’d it…i can relate tew diz wun!nice job!

  2. Gueston 25 Jun 2006 at 10:53 am

    so interesting. i deeply feel the hrmony between lines and my heart\’s melody. i cry.

  3. shiromion 22 Dec 2006 at 6:10 am


  4. heartbroken102488on 14 Feb 2007 at 10:27 pm

    i really loved this, it was deep and you could visualize what the poem was talking about :grin :cry

  5. Meon 06 Jun 2007 at 6:26 am

    i enjoyed this. but you drift off the point abt but all in all it\’s a very nice piece of work.

  6. lalaon 15 Dec 2007 at 10:38 pm

    i love yo poem dude it speax 2 m3 :cry :cry

  7. :'(on 04 Apr 2008 at 9:25 pm

    i cried

  8. sarah <|3on 21 May 2008 at 3:00 pm

    The words in this amazing poem really touch my heart. I can relate to this ..

  9. adrienneon 12 Jun 2008 at 11:48 pm

    read this and thought of all quiet on the western front movie. haunting, really.

  10. joanmarieon 12 Oct 2008 at 11:32 pm

    :cry today im a very heart broken person I fell in love with my cousin girl we were together until today she went back to her knowing that she realy wants to be with me but this my cousin haves a baby with her that her weakness so whiel im here cying my cousin is with her in her house but u know what. What\’s meant to be will always be so I let her fly if she finds her way home she\’s meant to be mines if not well its not meant to be mines. :cry

  11. nooneon 18 Nov 2009 at 8:08 pm

    i like this because no one likesme only GOD 🙂 :cry :upset :zzz :sigh 🙁

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