Sep 22 2010

Screaming and Bleeding

Published by at 10:20 pm under emo Poems

Slowly,
Softly,
You creep up just right out of sight.
Quickly,
Peircing,
A scream is heard in the middle of the night.
Now do you understand my pain?
Now do you see what you’ve done to me?

1 Star2 Stars3 Stars4 Stars5 Stars (10 votes, average: 4.70 out of 5)
Loading...

8 responses so far

8 Responses to “Screaming and Bleeding”

  1. # angel709on 23 Sep 2010 at 1:17 pm

    even though its short, i realy do like this!

  2. # BrokenBabyon 23 Sep 2010 at 8:24 pm

    Its the beginning of a song I wrote awhile back :3

  3. # meghanon 23 Sep 2010 at 11:13 pm

    I could put it on face book if you want cause I always put poems from this website on facebook

  4. # DyingInsideon 02 Oct 2010 at 3:42 pm

    Well done! I’d love to hear the rest of the song.

  5. # iwait4you4everon 02 Oct 2010 at 7:14 pm

    simply lovely and amazing.. very bittersweet which love can often be..but there are many other wonderful things that it can be too its all about perception.. good luck..

  6. # maxx blackon 11 Oct 2010 at 2:41 pm

    i dont get it. it sound lik ur getting rapped

  7. # Desiraeon 16 Oct 2010 at 4:46 pm

    =] this is great

  8. # kimberlyon 13 Dec 2010 at 7:58 am

    ;-( i loved it
    :love:

Trackback URI | Comments RSS

Leave a Reply