Sep 22 2010

Screaming and Bleeding

Published by at 10:20 pm under emo Poems

Slowly,
Softly,
You creep up just right out of sight.
Quickly,
Peircing,
A scream is heard in the middle of the night.
Now do you understand my pain?
Now do you see what you’ve done to me?

This post was submitted by AutomaticTorix3.

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8 Responses to “Screaming and Bleeding”

  1. angel709on 23 Sep 2010 at 1:17 pm

    even though its short, i realy do like this!

  2. BrokenBabyon 23 Sep 2010 at 8:24 pm

    Its the beginning of a song I wrote awhile back :3

  3. meghanon 23 Sep 2010 at 11:13 pm

    I could put it on face book if you want cause I always put poems from this website on facebook

  4. DyingInsideon 02 Oct 2010 at 3:42 pm

    Well done! I’d love to hear the rest of the song.

  5. iwait4you4everon 02 Oct 2010 at 7:14 pm

    simply lovely and amazing.. very bittersweet which love can often be..but there are many other wonderful things that it can be too its all about perception.. good luck..

  6. maxx blackon 11 Oct 2010 at 2:41 pm

    i dont get it. it sound lik ur getting rapped

  7. Desiraeon 16 Oct 2010 at 4:46 pm

    =] this is great

  8. kimberlyon 13 Dec 2010 at 7:58 am

    ;-( i loved it
    :love:

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