Apr 27 2011
Sixth Sense
My eyes can’t focus on you face
My eardrums can’t vibrate for your voice
My nose can’t inhale your fragrance
And of course, the air taste so artificial with your absence
But I can still sense you…my sixth sense
I sensed you
But where are you?
Tell me my Earth, the bearer of infinite weights
Please tell me where do you feel her feet?
You’ll never ever walk alone
Cause’ your beauty had pulled the great full moon,
I’m your sunflower, my little bright Sun
Following you behind, in rain and shine
With your figure in my SIXTH SENSE…
My mind preferred the alternate route
To just think about you
Ignoring the thoughts to revenge my foes
And just focus on you, just you…
I saw you
And I felt you too, my angel
You smooth silky skin painted by the Sun
My grasp on your spongy hands
Could never disregard those thoughts
Thanks to my Friday night dreams
And those memories are still untouched
Again I saw you
Those shiny strands of silky black hairs
Fluttering with various significances
Tip of your long hair scratching your back
I tried to chase you
But it wasn’t you, I missed again
Just a hallucination…
I wanna see you, wanna see you
My mind was so fervent
That you should look at me
Your adorable shining eyes, my mind had sketched
Pointing sharp like rose thorn, your perfectly shaped brows
Glittering under the moonlight, your beautiful tanned iris
I got you this time…but it was only your eyes
Your sharp nose slipped into my mind
With that red cherry lips and milk white teeth, just so fine
Carving an amazing smile that just calmed my anxious heart
Completing the face of yours
With that attractive fair complexion
There were nothing to be mentioned ‘but’
Oh My Gosh, how exquisite you are!
Prancing in my head
With both of your lotus feet apart
Chiming with the melodious anklet
In your white skirt with its gold borders
Forth and back, flung your earrings
As you pranced like an angel from paradise, hands with golden harp
I saw the reflection of bright sunlight
On your silky blouse that held my eyes to it
Just come to me
And transform my fantasy into reality
You’ll never be alone
Having my soul in your tone
My sadness had just gone
As you were about to come
I’m your sunflower, my little bright Sun
Following behind you, in rain and shine
With your figure in my SIXTH SENSE…
i love it man…;D
i love it man…;D :love:
Dang! That’s some powerful vocabulary. Too powerful actually… I couldn’t really keep up.
thank you so much…i gotta correct some careless grammatical mistakes though..:P 🙂
great poem……unique…..hats off to your ” sixth sense” :p 😉
thank you so much…i really appreciate it… 🙂
anonymouss:the word “dang” reminds me of a gurl…she uses that word so often…LOL!
My words are not supressed, just can’t be expressed, cause’ i’m impressed 😀
ITZ AWESOME BRADER
thanks brother! 😀