Apr 27 2011

Sixth Sense

Published by at 10:01 am under Teenage Love Poems

My eyes can’t focus on you face
My eardrums can’t vibrate for your voice
My nose can’t inhale your fragrance
And of course, the air taste so artificial with your absence
But I can still sense you…my sixth sense

I sensed you
But where are you?
Tell me my Earth, the bearer of infinite weights
Please tell me where do you feel her feet?
You’ll never ever walk alone
Cause’ your beauty had pulled the great full moon,
I’m your sunflower, my little bright Sun
Following you behind, in rain and shine
With your figure in my SIXTH SENSE…

My mind preferred the alternate route
To just think about you
Ignoring the thoughts to revenge my foes
And just focus on you, just you…

I saw you
And I felt you too, my angel
You smooth silky skin painted by the Sun
My grasp on your spongy hands
Could never disregard those thoughts
Thanks to my Friday night dreams
And those memories are still untouched

Again I saw you
Those shiny strands of silky black hairs
Fluttering with various significances
Tip of your long hair scratching your back
I tried to chase you
But it wasn’t you, I missed again
Just a hallucination…
I wanna see you, wanna see you

My mind was so fervent
That you should look at me
Your adorable shining eyes, my mind had sketched
Pointing sharp like rose thorn, your perfectly shaped brows
Glittering under the moonlight, your beautiful tanned iris
I got you this time…but it was only your eyes

Your sharp nose slipped into my mind
With that red cherry lips and milk white teeth, just so fine
Carving an amazing smile that just calmed my anxious heart
Completing the face of yours
With that attractive fair complexion
There were nothing to be mentioned ‘but’

Oh My Gosh, how exquisite you are!
Prancing in my head
With both of your lotus feet apart
Chiming with the melodious anklet
In your white skirt with its gold borders
Forth and back, flung your earrings
As you pranced like an angel from paradise, hands with golden harp
I saw the reflection of bright sunlight
On your silky blouse that held my eyes to it
Just come to me
And transform my fantasy into reality

You’ll never be alone
Having my soul in your tone
My sadness had just gone
As you were about to come
I’m your sunflower, my little bright Sun
Following behind you, in rain and shine
With your figure in my SIXTH SENSE…

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10 responses so far

10 Responses to “Sixth Sense”

  1. GVTon 09 May 2011 at 6:18 pm

    i love it man…;D

  2. GVTon 09 May 2011 at 6:18 pm

    i love it man…;D :love:

  3. anonymousson 02 Jul 2011 at 11:21 pm

    Dang! That’s some powerful vocabulary. Too powerful actually… I couldn’t really keep up.

  4. vetrion 08 Jul 2011 at 7:31 pm

    thank you so much…i gotta correct some careless grammatical mistakes though..:P 🙂

  5. Trisha Runelon 09 Jul 2011 at 5:13 am

    great poem……unique…..hats off to your ” sixth sense” :p 😉

  6. vetrion 09 Jul 2011 at 2:42 pm

    thank you so much…i really appreciate it… 🙂

  7. vetrion 09 Jul 2011 at 2:44 pm

    anonymouss:the word “dang” reminds me of a gurl…she uses that word so often…LOL!

  8. An Amazed Ladyon 22 Jan 2013 at 5:24 pm

    My words are not supressed, just can’t be expressed, cause’ i’m impressed 😀

  9. ARULon 24 Jan 2013 at 7:46 am


  10. Vetri Thillagan Gunaseelanon 03 Feb 2013 at 3:21 pm

    thanks brother! 😀

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