Nov 15 2011

Snow Falls Down

Published by at 3:37 pm under emo Poems

Painful breath, sobbing screams
Innocence gone just like her dreams
Music plays, the songs of death
There’s nothing left, she is bereft

She hears them talk, she is afraid
An oath was sworn, one that she made
Tiny hands, shake with fear
She knows her death is very near

Can this be it? Is life over?
Soon enough they’ll come for her
She tries to hide, but where to go?
She stares outside, stares at the snow

She prays to God, asks for might
She begs for faith to bring more light
She hears the door, closes her eyes
She wants to fight but she just cries

Mewling pleas as she breaks down
One more scream, and then no sound
Blood pools spread, scarlet pain
The snow falls down, and soon comes rain

Like waves on the shore, she’s washed away
Few people know, know of that day
Overwhelming loss, some want her back
Questions asked, of that attack

Some think of her, as more snow falls
The screams stay there, between those walls
It echos on, no peace of mind
Those men got back, got back in kind

Blood was spilled, she softly cried
More screams were heard, and then she died
What happened there? I do not know
Now I just stare, stare at the snow

This post was submitted by pixie.

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6 responses so far

6 Responses to “Snow Falls Down”

  1. Petty_Gurl_Swagon 18 Nov 2011 at 1:56 am

    😮 I think that yu are THEE best poet on this site

  2. pixieon 18 Nov 2011 at 12:09 pm

    I’m flattered. Thank you so much for the kind comment :p

  3. Zero :(:on 29 Nov 2011 at 3:43 am

    I would give it a 10 /5 😀

  4. meghan222on 01 Dec 2011 at 1:29 am

    This makes me so sad,I can’t help but be jelous of your talent pixie and if you post stories or any other type of writing somewhere else pleas tell me

  5. pixieon 02 Dec 2011 at 1:42 pm

    Haha. Practise makes perfect :p
    Actually, I write lots of other stories.
    I’m not going to give you links, because Admin has to check those.
    If you go to and look for Pixi you’ll find some of my work.
    Thanks, Zero :p you’re awesome.

  6. meghan222on 02 Dec 2011 at 7:02 pm

    cool,im booksie 2,but i dont have a lot on there

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