May 10 2011

Someone like you

Published by at 12:21 am under Heartbreak Poems

That very first day that we met
It’s a feeling I’ll never forget.
All the experiences that we’ve shared,
I knew right away that you were rare.
You see, it’s hard to find a someone like you,
Usually they’re too good to be true.
Though I should’ve entered with more ration,
But with you I felt so much passion.
I wish those things had never happened.
It feels as though my love’s been abandoned.
All I wanted was to make you happy,
So why is it that I have to feel so crappy?
I want nothing more than for us to move on,
But it’s so hard now that the trust is gone.
I want to get past this, I really do…
What can I do to make you be true?
My love for you is like an undying flame.
And I once wished for our love to remain.
Do you remember that day, the day that it snowed?
It’s the day that I wished for our love to grow.
You hurt me that night, you need to know that you did.
And I need you to know that I can forgive.
But I’m really struggling with trying to forget,
Because I still feel the same as that first day we met.

This post was submitted by elivyan.

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4 Responses to “Someone like you”

  1. Amandaon 10 May 2011 at 3:30 am

    This is great! I can relate to it very much. You did a wonderful job writing this! 😀

  2. Chrystalon 14 May 2011 at 1:05 am

    Awesome Poem !

  3. Sianaon 17 Jun 2011 at 6:12 pm

    I love this poem and as Amanda has said already – It has alot of relation. Really well done and hope to see more of your work in the future. 😀

  4. darkrainbow123on 18 Jun 2011 at 10:31 am

    neat! 😆

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