Jul 04 2011

Sweet Scarifice

Published by at 9:31 pm under Sad Love Poems

You’re the only one I would give my life for
You’re the only one I would love even more
You’re the constant voice in my heart
So how do you expect me to be apart?

I’m cold now, colder than what you call ice
Not numb because then I wouldn’t have felt the sweet sacrifice
Crawling through pain from day to day
Because you don’t say the same words you used to say

Leave my heart alone, don’t carry it along
At least now let go, ‘coz if you don’t it would be wrong
How many deaths I have died, but I still can’t forget
The time I spent with you and after that the crimson regret

Was I only made to get hurt?
Was I the only one you see lord?
Now I’m trapped in this painful song
Were you planning this for sometime long?

Hope you are satisfied
Coz you finally made mercy
I know you enjoyed
My sweet sacrifice.

This post was submitted by Trisha Runel.

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3 Responses to “Sweet Scarifice”

  1. pixieon 04 Jul 2011 at 10:52 pm

    I really liked the second stanza. The ending wasn’t really as strong as I’d expected it to be.
    Your title was very ominous and made me very excited to find out what happened.
    I was a little disappointed. But, overall, it was powerful.
    The intensity was lost a bit at the end.
    Minor problems :p

  2. Trisha Runelon 05 Jul 2011 at 6:57 am

    u r right….this isnt one of the best poetry i have written :straight:

  3. serena93on 05 Jul 2011 at 10:39 am

    i disagree, i thought it was beautifully written poem.
    An amazingly vivid look into heartache and you summed it up so cleanly.
    😀 good work (:

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