Oct 24 2010


Published by at 6:42 am under Heartbreak Poems

I love walking in the rain
Me and my broken hart
Crying in vain,
All the while being torn apart

Shedding my tears
Where nobody cares
After all these years
Only receiving stares

Falling with a soft sound
Gliding down leaves
Not in any way bound
Like tiny, little thieves

Cleansing my soul
Or so it would seem
Something you stole
Nothing more than a dream

The tears blind me
From reality
And if I could see
I wonder how sad I’d be

All in all
Tears are great
You don’t have to feel small
…Just wait

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7 responses so far

7 Responses to “Tears”

  1. iwait4you4everon 24 Oct 2010 at 10:11 pm

    simply beautiful and says so much with just a few words .. it is lovely πŸ˜€

  2. justsomegirlon 27 Oct 2010 at 1:28 pm

    that is so true πŸ™‚
    i love it.
    thanks for posting.. πŸ™‚

  3. pixieon 08 Nov 2010 at 5:22 pm

    Thanx for the support! i appreciate it!
    :whistle: :p πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

  4. itzelon 04 Dec 2010 at 4:31 pm

    yeah i feel the same wya cuz i like a guy but i’m scared that he won’t like me
    ;-( πŸ™

  5. pixieon 15 Dec 2010 at 10:48 am


  6. crunketton 25 Dec 2010 at 7:28 pm

    this poem is soooo good. it is written well and has a great meaning behind it. i really liked it.

  7. pixieon 15 Mar 2011 at 2:09 pm

    thank you so much πŸ™‚

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