Sep 09 2010

Tears and Blood

Published by at 6:46 pm under emo Poems

All i feel is pain
All i see is tears and blood
my past haunts me every single second of my life
i cant make it stop
i cant make it go away
please someone make it stop
it hurts
it wont stop
the anger in me wont finish
the hate wont go away
i have locked up everything inside me
with words unsaid
feelings unexpressed
everything kept inside
and there is will remain all eternity

the pain is rushing through my body
please make it stop
please make it go away
i cant bare it anymore
my hands are shivering
my bodys trembling
the pain to strong for me to bare
i cant take it anymore
i feel weak
i cant stop it
please, please
just make it go away
all i want is the pain to go away

This post was submitted by sofiel.

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9 responses so far

9 Responses to “Tears and Blood”

  1. poetry_girlon 14 Sep 2010 at 5:11 am

    hey I know this is kind of awkward and I’m a complete stranger but…if you ever need to talk I’m a good listener lol

  2. gomzzzon 18 Sep 2010 at 6:46 am

    😀 lovely

  3. sofielon 18 Sep 2010 at 9:47 am

    @Poerty_girl thankz really sweeet of u ^_^

  4. KaTiEon 20 Sep 2010 at 9:50 pm

    I dont know you,
    I dont know what you look like,
    But i know one thing from what i just read i fell like i’v known you all my life
    That poem is my life story in just those littel words.
    I would like to see what you are like msg me i dont need to see your
    pic but it sounds like that :straight: gte at me

  5. emma slaon 12 Oct 2010 at 5:14 pm

    this poem is actually amazing! i know how you feel..

  6. anonymouson 17 Oct 2010 at 2:54 am

    I don’t know if you have any faith, but this is why Jesus came to earth as one of us…to take the pain away. It’s not exactly a quick fix, but, in the end, with Him, suffering like that isn’t futile. Also, it isn’t fair to yourself to stuff all of your painful emotions like that. Please for Heaven’s sake get the help of a friend or psychologist (I deliberately recommend in that order) to learn how to express yourself. Your poetry is awesome, but how cool would it be if you could create art that well with positive emotions? Don’t create Hell for yourself. Life is hard enough.

  7. Beccy~Roseon 23 Nov 2010 at 2:58 am

    Thats amzing bubba 🙂 and i cant imagine what your going through <3 i love you 🙂

  8. cody ravenon 17 Mar 2011 at 4:06 pm

    omg i really luv that poem so much . lol that poem says so much about me
    that is sooooo cooool i fell your pain lolololol

  9. pixieon 02 May 2011 at 5:05 pm

    i wish i could take ur pain
    it doesnt seem right that more than one person feels this way
    i hope ur ok
    beautiful poem
    ;-( ^_^

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