Feb 12 2006
The end of love, the start of pain
The end of love, the start of pain
The end of love, the start of pain
The blood from my heart that now aches, stains
With the thought of your image, the thought of you care
Devoted to another, whilst my spirit is bare
Where am I to go, where is my hope now
Am I no longer important like our dedicated vows
You promised to always be there, and love me no matter what
But it seems you?ve moved on, loved another and forgot
The breakdown of our relationship, the break of my poor heart
You punctured it with your cruel ways; you stabbed it with a dart
You took away my faith, my dreams, I now have nothing left
My happiness has disappeared; a brutal act of theft
You promised to always be there, but now it all depends
On if you?ve found another love and when my heartache ends
-By Lucy Arnold
(11 votes, average: 4.18 out of 5)
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This poem is very nice and it relates to me a lot
this poem makes me think bout all the times ive been cheated on
hello. youre poem was really meaningfull because im still fresh from my first heartbreak.
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[B]that was so beautiful that i got tears in my eyes[/B]..you know how to write poems that mean something..that poem brought tears to my eyes because i feel inlove and then we broke up because of other people..i really enjoyed your poem alot thank you for sharing it..
holly aka baby bug
exactly how im feeling, ur a very good writter
I love your poem. It relates alot to me. I recently had a girl who I thought to be my friend backstab me with my boyfriend and your poem says exactly how I feel. Thank you.
[B]your poem is so awesome!!! [/B]
[B]that was so beautiful that i got tears in my eyes[/B]..you know how to write poems that mean something..that poem brought tears to my eyes because i feel inlove and then we broke up because of other people..i really enjoyed your poem alot thank you for sharing it..
holly aka baby bug
That poem is so lovely!!It makes me wann cry.
That poem is so lovely!!It makes me wann cry.
i\’ve just been dumped too and this poem really sums up all that i\’m feeling now. it\’s so sad and heartbreaking. thanks for sharing it!
reeally nice poem..i loved it..im getting over a relationship right now..it helps and stregnthens me
that is rei good
that poem is beautiful and very touching u should b proud of ya self. x x
THAT WAS SO GOOD IT HURT
Damn great poem.. so much feelings .. loved it.. im cryin right now, cant take it.. damn.. uff.. im gonna make it through the rain, im gonna make it
beautiful.
I really enjoyed your poem, very deep and touching. Excellent!!!!!
awww its so freaking sad…*wait what am i doing! im supposed to be doing a poetry project not moping around!*
Kathryn aka Kitty
wow i like that a lot. I feel like i can relate.
am heartbroken and the pain is killing me this poem means alot
this is a really nice piece…I feel the same way.
i can really relate to this poem
I loved your poem. We share the same feelings.
every word touches my heart. This is how I feel. Thank u.
hey, that was really well written. It captures alot of emotion and the true dealings of ones heartbreak. I have recently been dumped by a guy who sed he loved me one day then the next was like see you later. So it brought out alot of emotions on how i am feeling. Well Done!! Should be proud!
touchhiin . ndds iit\’s killiin ` me .
[B]that waz realli beutiful i am g0ing thr0ugh this rite n0w,n this realli did t0uched me al0t[/B]
ur really talented and im glad i got to read ur poem it really helped me alot. thank u so much
Hey there,
This is a very good poem, its very powerful, it made me start crying. I always remember this poem.
Hey…ur poem was touchin and it made me feel like yourself..u kno, so keep it up and believe that u can get thru it.
this poem was so great and so touching i just burst into tears bcoz u took my feelings and made them wordz
wow itz amazing
WOW! This is totally amazing! I don\’t knowhow old you are and I don\’t really need to know, but this is just perfect… I went through a break up like this just over a year ago… and the pain is still woth me… everyday, i go to school and look at him and ask myself why i\’m th one who had to suffer…. but now i know… it\’s because they never wanted me for me in the first place… they just wanted the label as the Boyfriend… yeah the pain is still with me, but after reading this, it\’s eased my mind on why it was me who suffered… Thank you so much! Keep the poems coming!
wow thats really good. i just went through a breakup last week..and he meant everything to me and it was perfect. and this is how i feel yea. :cry [B]null[/B]
This poem is out of this world!….It has so much meaning and i know where you are coming from! This poem has soo much meaning i almost cried! :cry I love it…Keep writing and I will keep reading! 🙂
:cry
[B]null[/B] wow that was awesome dude!! i kno wut ur going through.. my boyfriend broke up with me over 3 months ago and i still have feelings for him.. he went out with another girl there but u kno ssh*t happens… n.e ways I LOVE THIS!! IT ROXXX
:cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
Well im only young and im sure i dont no wat love is yet but when i read this it made me scared of love.
i hope that one day i will find someone who makes me happy.
I have had a few boyfriends and there name were Joe, Lewis and Jonno and i thought i loved them but now im not sure 😕
WOW THIS POEM IS SO GOOD I LOVED IT. IT REMINDED ME OF MY SITUATION :sigh
love is not a fair game.
we may all feel bad after a heartbreak but its natural.
everyone feels pain if there really in love.
and you can tell when your in love when reality is finally better than your dreams.
telling everyone that your mopey and that you show it, it makes people scared of you.
love has intimacy passion and heartaches.
you experience all of those.
plus more.
but you\’ll get over your heartache when a new boy/girl comes along.
you wont be sad forever.
you have to keep your hopes up and not focus on these types of things all the time.
be happy not mopey.
because love isnt a critical thing.
I know how yall feel even thought me is still young but da** i just got out of a relstationship and let me tell you that my home gurl text me saying your boyfriend said it over and he loves me know so stay the F*** alwaly from him B****
i am just another random person on the internet but i really appreciated this poem and i think that alot of other ppl did 2… it would be really great if u kept writing other poems like these, and anything else that comes 2 mind 🙂 .. BTW it is VERY touching and very inspiring.
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wow.. dumb asses
I love this… I was once the person who broke there heart but now that i know how it feels i will never be the same
Wow that is so sad, I know how that feels though I am going through the same thing with my 2 biggest loves ever. My ex-fianse, andex-boyfriend. I would do anything to be back with them, but they don\’t seem to want me. It\’s okthough you will make it through though I promise. :cry :sigh
[B]WOW THIS POEM WAS REAL GOOD I CAN RELATE!!!![/B] 🙂 :sigh
im glade you write about things that are real cuz everybody has been heartbroken already im sure but this wuz on of the best poems i have heard its really good plz keep on writting stuff like this. :cry its so good it mad me want to cry for the guy that broke my heart so plz keep up the great work and keep writting.
I dont want to cry :cry
Fabulous. Thank you so much 🙂
Hope you get past the pain
Wow , Thats soo true i just split from my boyfriend it hurt so much to realise he doesnt love me as much as he made out its left me wrecked and broken, i dont know how i will move on , i cant eat or sleep iam always so down and to make it worse i cant contact him no more!! :cry i dont know what to do but this poem really is exactley what iam feeling xx :sigh :cry :sigh
:cry oh my god this poem so reminds me of me its such a true poem keep the great work up its so great!!! 🙂 :cry :cry
[B]null[/B] i love this poem it so sounds like me and my ex that just broke up after 7 months and he doesnt care about me any more he has a new girl on his mind and its hurting i love him so much and always will!
love shane & skye
[B]DAMN I REALLY CRIED WHEN I READ THIS…..I KNOW EXACTLY THE FEELING![/B]
:cry man diz was so so sad![B]man diz was so so sad[/B]
:cry
i no how it feels and it hurts so much im heartbroken too n it is so painfull y?
it defiently feels like they have put a dart in it tht is for sure and who do u make the pain go???
xxx
i CRIED WHEN I READ THIS Poem. I mean my boyfriend and I were just going through this. I don\’t want to admit to him that I miss him
[I]null[/I] this is like gonna make me cry :sigh
[B]null[/B][U]null[/U] :eek OMG WOT A TOUCHIN POEM PUT STRIAGHT IN TEARS BY JST THE NAME OF THE POEM, I KNW WOT UR GOING THROUGH CUZ I AM :cry :cry :cry :cry ….
:cry i cried my eyes out when i read this i was not just crying on the outside i was crying on the inside too my heart was bleeding. i have experianced something just like that and i know the feeling. :cry
He did tha eact things to me i hate him with all my heart :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
aww this is so sad 🙁
like [B]very[/B] sad. :cry :cry :cry
I LOVE IT… :zzz … but it kinda struck my heart… :sigh
da poem is vry nice but 😕 it made me :cry
i know how all you girls feel mine just left and didnt tell me or anyone anything he just up and left this is a great poem it made me think 😕 and cry :cry
I as just surfing around lookin @ poems, but 1 lyk this I neva read…. amazing!!!!! :eek :cry :cry :cry
oh my god that is so sad my bf cheated on with ny best mate and this poem is so sad :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
Ok well I am a guy and I know exactly what you are saying, I never knew anything was wrong because she always acted happy, and then after 8 years together 6 of those years married she left me. So its not just women that feel the way you do, its just that some men think they are to strong to feel this kind of pain…
That\’s such an awesome poem!! Omg, I kno how u feel, my fiance just dumped me cuz I told him I might be preagnant :cry :cry :cry :cry
I cried so much, im not preagnant thank god but the heartache is still there
it\’s so true. i have had my heart broken and it does hurt to see the one you love to have feelings for another. i know because my ex left me and he has feelings for another. i want to tell him that i still love him and see if we can work things out but i don\’t know how. these poems give me courage to do it. so thanks
OMG this poem is ssssooooo good!! I am like in love with this gay and it just hurts when we fight this is AMAZING!!!!! :cry
its a well sad poem as if
:grin it made me laugh like hell
this is indeed true!!its like losing everything in a blink of an eye.worse is when you see them together and look at you straight in the eye and says hi while she\’s holding her boyfriends hands..and later that night you could hear them talk about their plans and dreams which are the same dreams both of you used to have together..sad part is that you can\’t do anything but to just walk away. :sigh
this is amazing
my x cheated on me twice and left me….ugh i hate love… :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry
I can sense the feeling of the writer as I am going through the same. She used to love me for what I have and didn\’t love me for what I am :(. Now I am alone and looking for someone who love me for what I am. Any beautiful single can contact me 🙂
like i totally can\’t believe that there are writers out there who can actually describe my feelings, cause i was like with this guy and even though neither of us has said that we should break up i can tell that the relationship is over and i know that it\’s because of this other girl that he was tutoring at the beginning of the year, even though he constantly denies it. it hurts so much but still i can\’t let go and it feels like i\’m addicted to his abuse and even though my heart says leave, my feet wont move.[B]null[/B]
like i totally can\\\’t believe that there are writers out there who can actually describe my feelings, cause i was like with this guy and even though neither of us has said that we should break up i can tell that the relationship is over and i know that it\\\’s because of this other girl that he was tutoring at the beginning of the year, even though he constantly denies it. it hurts so much but still i can\\\’t let go and it feels like i\\\’m addicted to his abuse and even though my heart says leave, my feet wont move.[B]null[/B]
they are afraid of loving someone else in their life cause once they feel it they run away from it and move on without a care in the world
and that is why some people on this earth have love issues
:cry i really lke this poem it just describe any any every felling that i have. it almost made me cry.
:sigh dang this kind of calming :cry :p
[B]null[/B] :cry :cry :sigh :sigh 😕 :upset 🙁 🙁 i hide my feelings from him, casue i was scared he wouldnt like me for who iam,everything seems fine, after i finally do, another month goes by..than out of no where, he says i never let him in, and im a pathick bitch that held on to my last break up and couldnt get over it..on top of that he was cheating on me. Now im left out in the rain, feeling like my heart was ripped out, and im left in my own cold blood that drips from where i used have a beat.. :sigh :sigh :sigh :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry I THOUGHT HE LOVED ME!!!! 😕 😕 if anyone wants to add me, go ahead. :cry :cry :sigh
this happened to me first the guy tells me that he loves me then the next day he calla me saying that he kissed his ex girlfriend and that he was confused and then the girl told him that he had to chose who she wanted to be with and he chose her and let me heartbroken love really hurts
Man i like this one it is so pretty and reminds me of my ex gurlfriend i miss her so much :cry [B]null[/B][B]null[/B]
:cry i feel you..love it
mind if i use this in a song and include your name? :roll
i love this poem dude its awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :p 8) :grin :roll 😕 :upset
this poem is beautiful..i love it…I just went through a break up like this about a week ago..so i feel you!
jUst dRoppin\’ bY!!
:eek 🙁 :s igh :cry THE POEM WAS STR8 COULD OF BEEN BETTER
I really want to use this poem in an asignment but i cant pick out of all the poetry techniques used . . . . . . .
i really want to use this poem in an asignment but need help picking out the poetry techniques used . . . . . :cry
I would love to use this poem and turn it into a poem for a production im working on so if I could get your permission please contact me back at [email protected] and thank you very much! It truely touched my heart… 🙂
Omg , im in so much pain and this poem explains things well , i loved someone so much tiwas unreal , the way i felt , he sed hell always love me but has moved on and rubs it in my face , but i cant help but love him , i tell everybody im over him and say i dow care , but deep down im tearing to pieces the walls in my world are falling down , ive never felt pain like this before , its unbearable , im so scared i love him so much ill never be able to stop, but if its not meant to be why wont the feelings melt away , will i evert truely move i ? i dont think so , ive tried so hard with everything i have and its doesnt help , i need him , i cant live without him , but hes says he misses me ? :S im conused wot does this means :s
I am looking for a poem that I can give my husband who after 19 yrs of marriage who has turned into this sex addict, drugs, and pron addict. He has started taking drugs and I can not longer live with it. I want him to know how he has hurt me and how he has forgotten about our marriage, how he blames me and has made everyting about him. I am deeply hurt and I want him to feel my pain. I need to be alone now and not in a relationship inwhich it has to be all about him and his insecurities. Someone help me!!!
i hate love and i hate boys.. but im not lezzO!!!!
:upset FROM MY FRIEND
I have had my heart broken and its hard but you move on and you kow wat i shagged some one ese nd it was mmmm gooooodd!!!
LOL, itsounds bad but im 14 and it ws my 1st time!!
I really wanted to with my ex but he left me for anothe chick. I think thats the worst part coz i loved him so much and he was farking hot as!!!
But i realised shagging some one else really doesnt help get over it!
I have my best friend wiht me and really supportive friends that were there for me! Im better then him anyway, i have to stay possitive!
There are so many people around us that can guide and help us. Listn to your heart, theres nothng else you can do!
dont make the mistake i did by getting drunk, smoking, shagging to cover up my upsetness!
mm..yea, so thats the firt time ive opened up to strangers!
LOL
:roll
xoxoxoxoox[U]null[/U][U]nothing[/U]
THis poem is very true, really happened to me right now. although we have no formal breakup yet, it means, it will lead to this. For the past 5 years of relationship, he promised me that he will never let me go, that he will always there for me. But he just left me without a word, no communication for 4 months now.Until now, i still holding on to his promise and believe that it will come true. To you my honey, i hope that you find inyour heart the love that you feel the same feeling. You are my life, my dreams, you know that. I love you very much.
:cry this is so true it happend to me with my ex boyfriend we where together for a year and then he dumped me
i now dats haw i felt wen i brok up w/ mi booo i miss him soo much i felt lik i wuz goin 2 die!!!!!! :cry
omg does everyone feel the same way when there heart gets brokeN?? how do we move on? please tell me!
:cry its true..[I]null[/I]
ya. it really haapen to all of us.
end of LOVE end of LIFE :cry
my gf left me………………. she said yes to me only so she wouldnt hurt me……. i had broken up with her a year back and now she is paying me back in kind…………..
:cry
[B]This is so sad, i read it and cried baby cried [/B] :cry 😡 :sigh :upset :eek 🙁 :roll
[B]null[/B]ih never wanna be left from my boifrannd we where toqheter for like 8 or 7 or 9 months riqht now and ih dont want him to leave me cuz that would just heartbrake me , this poem ish really really touchinq. ;3 :cry
after 3 yrs ngun lng bumuksan ang puso ko….pro nsaktna lang ako.. :eek :grin
I lovedd it, it really gets the point of heartbreakk across. (; keep it goinggg. ♥
this is a beautiful poem 🙁
wow that just blew me away
Short words
🙁 its very nice poems……… . . . . . . ,, , , ,
and i know ur felling about that
it is because my gf is break from me….,,
it hard to accept ,,,,,.
i will forget sombdy,,,,
because oll of my sacrificing to someone
im failde!!!!!!
tns to make ur poems!!!!
huh!!!! :alien:
i felt like you were writing that as you read and searched my thoughts bout my gf and i.
Thank you so much for this Poem i like it really by heart.You know i have love she love me 2much may be more than me but sometime she is changing for short time i don’t know why? she is telling 2 me every time that “sweety” i cannot find same like you God send you in this world only 4me 4ever i cannot live without you sweety, but sometime iam secared? what i do?
so true love your poem =] 😆 xD :p :ninja:
its really nice poem…i really love it..it really important to me alots…b/c my bf n me broke up…it was very sad…thank you for this peom so much…
Okay i understand where all of you guys are coming from but don’t cry about being cheated on if anything you should b furious not sad…u can do better that person you where with didn’t deserve u and u deserve way better if u are really worth it you will find someone you can give your heart so and wont have to worry about them braking it… AND TO ALL THE CHEATERS OUT THERE THANK U, U MAKE IT EASIER TO FIND THE GOOD PEOPLE THAT DESERVE TO BE LOVED. 😀
i broke someones heart last night
it was the right thing to do, im sure, because i was leading him on
i feel extra shitty now
its beautiful – the poem, i mean
;-( ^_^ ;-(
takk for dikt,, dt gjelder mye mye mye for mg,, dette føleser er som minne ting
I like the poem it relates to mi in a lot of ways
Just my actually feelings…. I’m so sad…. wonderful poeme !!
this poeme just reflects my actually feeling…
This poem is so true… I am going through what the poem is saying. But I can honestly say there will be a brighter side to it, it is just too small to see right now. There is always a brighter side to everything.
love it. it accually describs my fellings 😀
Wonderful poem 🙂 really means a lot. Keep it up.
My Heart Is Broken. My Boyfriend Left Me Alone. 🙁 🙁 🙁 🙁 🙁 But I Don’t Know Why I Still Love Him.
I’M IN :love: :love: :love: :love:
woaaw… it’s so nice..
i feel the same way……
it made me cry 🙁
I am heartbroken and am nt active lik b4 .i left the work and i cry everynight that was ma first lover .am jus 23 n he was almost 39 we planed everythin and we were almost getting married .i trusted him but no he jus dumped for nothing.he dont even answer ma cal pls advice what can i do
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this relates to me a lot. My (ex) boyfriend Hiram s mom didn’t like me so she stopped him from coming over. we loved each other and then I found out he was cheating on me and he told me he wasn’t and I got so sad so I broke up with him and he still comes over. but its akward and we still like each other but he is not aloud back over. and Im so sad and he has to lie to his mom and tell her he hates me and he doesn’t he loves me and I love him and I miss him a lot. what should I do?
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from. Thank you for posting when you have the opportunity, Guess I will
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