Jun 26 2011

The Snake that lies

Published by at 1:06 am under Betrayal Poems

You disgust me I can’t believe you, after all the things we’ve been through.
This is how you ended it? With a simple goodbye? and now you expect me to run away and simply cry?

Well I guess were not quite the same. For that I’ll take the blame.

You and I both know it, your a cheater, a pushover a fake.
Now I know the truth your just a lying snake.

You tell me you love me and we share a night of bliss. But Bam! I wake up the next day and your back to a snake.”Hiss!”

I never should have gotten close, I used to think our love was true. But now I see the cheating girl that lies inside of you.

Your beauty on the outside and you act like a saint. But on the inside there’s poison enough to make everyone faint.

You’ve hurt me a lot, and it took time but I eventually forgot.

Now all I remember of you is the girl who never even tries. When I see you pass me by, I see the snake that lies.

This post was submitted by Josiah Goodman.

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2 Responses to “The Snake that lies”

  1. pixieon 26 Jun 2011 at 7:50 am

    i would have changed this sentence:
    Now I know the truth – your just a lying snake.
    it makes all the difference. makes it more… abrupt, kind of. put emphasis on the words that r more important.
    overall, awesum

  2. Medoon 16 May 2012 at 2:54 am

    Good for you for doing this in the first place and good for you for not forcing yeuosrlf to keep going. We’re not getting any younger, as the saying goes. I no longer feel any obligation to finish a book I start. There’s just so much out there. Congratulations on what you accomplished.

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