Jul 30 2010
The Truth Hurts
The truth is you were never there,
you were always treating me unfair.
you never cared,you never loved,
i was never the one you were thinking of.
you had other girls waiting in line,
why couldnt i see you were wasting my time.
i meant nothing to you at all,
i was just another girl you could call.
i was nothing but an object useless but visible,
you made me feel like such a criminal.
im not in your thoughts or in your heart,
i guess its time for us to part.
you dont want me,im lost for words,
the truth is, the truth hurts.
🙂 wow this is amazing
you are a fantastic poet
this made me feel like im the girl in the poem
well done 😀
rely well written…simple language but da effect n da tone is too strong…
This is a great poem. Keep it up
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Xcellent poem..
Keep it up..
Really good (:
I love this <3
!!!!!!!!!!AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
XoXo
This is exactly Whats going on with me. I fell in love with a player who didnt care about me. I was just another card in his deck. You helped me get through this.
AMAZING<3
very well written 🙂