Jul 30 2010

The Truth Hurts

Published by at 7:54 pm under Heartbreak Poems

The truth is you were never there,

you were always treating me unfair.

you never cared,you never loved,

i was never the one you were thinking of.

you had other girls waiting in line,

why couldnt i see you were wasting my time.

i meant nothing to you at all,

i was just another girl you could call.

i was nothing but an object useless but visible,

you made me feel like such a criminal.

im not in your thoughts or in your heart,

i guess its time for us to part.

you dont want me,im lost for words,

the truth is, the truth hurts.

This post was submitted by katibabi.

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9 Responses to “The Truth Hurts”

  1. chelsey boweringon 01 Aug 2010 at 9:52 am

    🙂 wow this is amazing
    you are a fantastic poet
    this made me feel like im the girl in the poem
    well done 😀

  2. sreyashion 24 Aug 2010 at 7:12 am

    rely well written…simple language but da effect n da tone is too strong…

  3. Jessicaon 07 Sep 2010 at 9:17 pm

    This is a great poem. Keep it up

  4. Abhishekon 09 Sep 2010 at 7:11 pm

    Wow Wonderful …. Xcellent… No wrd I’ve gt…
    Simple Language wel wrritten…
    Tdy u’ve surley made a fan of urs…
    I wld be vry much interested in reading ur other poems..
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    Thnx a lt..

    Xcellent poem..
    Keep it up..

  5. BrokenBabyon 06 Oct 2010 at 3:02 am

    Really good (:
    I love this <3

  6. pixieon 24 Oct 2010 at 8:05 am


  7. Black Lipstickon 30 Nov 2010 at 7:20 am

    This is exactly Whats going on with me. I fell in love with a player who didnt care about me. I was just another card in his deck. You helped me get through this.

  8. Drella28on 31 Dec 2010 at 3:42 am


  9. and its ally62on 14 Mar 2011 at 3:41 pm

    very well written 🙂

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