Jun 03 2005

This Love

Published by at 3:19 pm under Sad Love Poems

This Love

A term that I once used,
To find again so quickly now,
I feel it’s been abused.

You light the fire in my heart,
You make me want to live,
Your feelings for him grows me dark,
There’s nothing more to give,

A straggler amongst the group,
I’ve found my way outside,
I fear that you don’t want my love,
This cave I’ve found to hide,

I understand his pain,
I know why he won’t stop,
His heart and soul is set on you,
His feelings can’t just flop,

I hold my chest in pain,
Tears from this face; destroyed,
A light inside me dies,
I back off; you feel annoyed.

This fire you keep putting out,
But then you light the flame,
Darkness swallowed in my light,
There’s only me to blame,

Lovely how this is right now,
This feeling; I’m confused,
Lies, depression, over expression,
This love that is abused,

I cannot seem to hold this love,
With defeat right at my side,
This love-filled cave; confusion built,
This place of cold; I hide.
-Dennis Mayer

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38 responses so far

38 Responses to “This Love”

  1. Gueston 03 Jun 2005 at 3:34 pm

    I am the first one on write a comment and I say it was beautiful

    [B]I love it[/B]

  2. Gueston 03 Jun 2005 at 3:41 pm

    kjfidjwhfkdhsn fdkfjsjfkds nfdksnjfmnvkzxcj I am a little girl thata wiil be a bad girl I that Bo y of my friend does nbot stop betterin gm,e I do not noiw what is wrong with him but i donot care I just want him to stop baterring me I hope hecould hear me.

  3. Gueston 01 Nov 2005 at 10:03 am

    this poem is sooo full of beauty and it really touched me and i felt so bad for the author its like i too was going through all the pain

  4. Gueston 11 Oct 2005 at 10:58 am

    The poem was so sweet, i loved it.

  5. Gueston 18 Sep 2005 at 10:14 pm


  6. Gueston 12 Nov 2005 at 9:33 pm

    WoWthats a BEATUIFUL poem[/B]

  7. Gueston 06 Jan 2006 at 9:56 am

    omg that was too nice it relates so much

  8. Gueston 24 Dec 2005 at 7:47 pm

    this poem is preety keep making poems like this..

  9. Gueston 30 Dec 2005 at 2:42 pm

    hey this poems is so nice i love your poems it seems sad and peaceful but one day it\’ll come true….I LOVE IT….

  10. Gueston 07 Dec 2005 at 2:18 pm

    i really enjoy this poem it has a lot of touch to it.. good job!

  11. Gueston 18 Dec 2005 at 11:46 am

    Hay Dennis Maye,
    The poem was so handsome i like is too much ,

  12. Gueston 23 Jan 2006 at 9:39 am

    heyy it\’s a beautiful poem.

  13. Gueston 06 Apr 2006 at 9:51 pm

    This is a beautiful poem reminds me of a relationship im in right now. Well not my boyfriend but a friend that has feeligs for me as i do him[B]null[/B]

  14. Gueston 19 Feb 2006 at 11:10 am

    LOVE is the lowest form of suiside….

  15. Gueston 11 Apr 2006 at 12:33 pm

    eveyone luvs did because everyone remembers how it feels to beturnedawayor ignored

  16. Gueston 01 May 2006 at 8:39 pm


  17. Gueston 04 Mar 2006 at 1:26 am

    this poem is jst so sweet and and sad, but its wat happens, i luv it its gr8, well done

  18. Gueston 10 Mar 2006 at 10:18 am

    Thats really beautiful poem!

  19. Gueston 17 Mar 2006 at 2:35 am

    thank you.. =)

  20. Gueston 27 Mar 2006 at 12:01 am

    dis is awesome ur so talented

  21. Gueston 08 Jun 2006 at 4:00 pm

    [B]this poem is very touching actually, i had to go thriugh with somethuing very similar to this because i loved someone who had a boyfriend in a different state and she said let\’s be friends =][/B]

  22. Gueston 08 Sep 2006 at 8:42 pm

    this is a great poem.. inspirs me!

    thank you

  23. Gueston 23 Aug 2006 at 11:12 pm

    I really love your poem[B][/B]

  24. Gueston 31 Oct 2006 at 9:19 am

    that was wow. no word 2 explain ur poem but it touch me.

  25. Gueston 03 Nov 2006 at 10:26 pm

    Well i think this poem is very touchin by far the very best i have ever seen

  26. Sandyon 19 Feb 2007 at 8:02 am

    wow it is really cool 8)

  27. fernon 05 May 2007 at 5:35 pm

    this poem is amazing

    its how my heart feels right now :cry
    i hope it doesn\’t last but this poam will stay with me until it changes [B]null[/B][B]null[/B]

  28. jhatuon 06 Dec 2007 at 11:14 pm

    🙁 this is all shit!!!

  29. julieon 11 Dec 2007 at 3:24 pm

    :cry its so awesome it made me cry. jk i love the poem 🙂

  30. mollyon 25 Mar 2008 at 10:21 pm

    oh wow! that was really amazing it brought a little tear to my eye :cry it was very deep, but still to the point

  31. jesson 25 Apr 2008 at 7:51 pm

    that is an amazing poem
    i am in a happy relationship but i can still undertsand the feelings in the poem
    :cry its a very meanigfull peom

  32. alucardon 30 Apr 2008 at 2:28 am

    best one I\’ve read so far

  33. iBrokenon 26 Jul 2008 at 9:55 am

    Amazing Poem. :sigh

  34. kaseyon 17 Aug 2008 at 3:46 pm

    This poem brought tears to my eyes, because I know where this guy is coming from.
    I am in love with a guy thats in love with someone else, and I can\’t stand it anymore.

    I love him so much and he doesnt seem to understand that. :cry :cry :cry :cry

  35. Hidden Poeton 15 Oct 2008 at 6:42 am

    I love you
    Always have
    always will
    Wether Im across the sea
    Or far across the green Hills

    When you look at me with those hazel eyes
    Or when I watch you gently fall asleep
    When I am cold
    And you smile
    It feels like I am being warmed by a fire

    When I slyly watch you when you don’t notice
    And when you catch me
    I Suddenly Divert my Infatuated Gaze
    She Smiles and gently sqeeuzes my hand

    But I Never told you
    Fearing the thought of being forlorn
    And the pain
    For How you one such as you,
    Love a Beast like me?

  36. Blahhon 18 Jan 2009 at 10:55 am

    same situation :sigh

  37. anthea on 20 Feb 2009 at 11:48 am

    :grin thAT WAS NCY MWA

  38. foreigneron 27 Mar 2009 at 4:14 am

    This poem talks about the irony of love, the more you go up the bigger the let down yet the more the make up process gives.I am heartbroken but can never fall out of love with love. ode to you.

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