Apr 16 2011

Transparent dreams.

Published by at 1:48 pm under Heartbreak Poems

I tried to give you my all
But my gestures you declined.
So as my heart wilted
And went up in smoke
You smiled
That ever charming smile.
I felt a glimmer of hope
Then you laughed
Leaving me foolish
And broken.
Just a footprint in the sand
Waiting to be washed away.
I’ll crawl under my rock,
Praying for the sun to come.
And as it warms my back
I think of you
And what we could’ve been.
Would it have been different
If I was blessed with
Elegance and beauty.
Would things be different then?
I threw a stone at my reflection
In hope that it would change.
But as the the water rippled then settled.
The picture stayed the same.
Pitiful and plain.
I see you on the horizon.
I see you in the moon.
But I cannot see you next to me anytime soon.

This post was submitted by serena93.

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5 responses so far

5 Responses to “Transparent dreams.”

  1. pixieon 16 Apr 2011 at 4:26 pm

    sweetly sorrowful
    fantastic ending
    love it

  2. ..dark eyes..on 17 Apr 2011 at 9:07 am

    lovely….jeez it great….:love:

  3. beautifully brokenon 15 Jul 2011 at 7:16 am

    i almost cried…it was so sad and beautiful…and i can easily relate to it.

    i love it..you did an outstanding job <3

  4. Justaboyon 15 Jul 2011 at 9:40 am

    Wonderful job, truly fantastic. Thank you for letting us read it. 🙂

  5. serena93on 22 Oct 2011 at 10:13 am

    thanks guys (:

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