Nov 30 2011

Trufully

Published by at 12:03 pm under emo Poems

They turn a blind eye to my sadness
They leave me in the dark
They don’t see the scars on my arm
From the knife that was so sharp

They turn away in fear
When I look them in the eye
They say that I am as dark
As the midnight sky

I dress up in black
As if someone died
When I said I just like the color
I lied

Maybe it’s in my genetics
To live this strange way
But trufully I just want
To die this way

This post was submitted by meghan222.

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5 Responses to “Trufully”

  1. xxPlagueRatxxon 02 Dec 2011 at 12:22 am

    :'(xx always here..x

  2. pixieon 02 Dec 2011 at 8:54 pm

    Can I maybe give a tiny bit of advice?
    Okay, the thing is, listen to the way it sounds out loud. The number of syllables in each line contributes to how smooth asnd eloquent it sounds when read.
    For example, stanza 3 might sound a tad bit better if the lines were closer to the same length.
    What I absolutely adore about your poetry is that the words you use to rhyme are original, like dark and sharp in this particular one.
    Really great job, meghan222. Keep it up :p

  3. meghan222on 03 Dec 2011 at 3:47 pm

    Thanks for the advice 😀

  4. nobody :'(on 16 Dec 2011 at 3:44 pm

    I really liked your poem…

  5. shelby2015on 30 Dec 2011 at 8:44 pm

    =] Realy amazing. I understand every thing your going through its like we change but no one notest then when th3y finaly do THEY DONT CARE
    keep it up girly be who you are

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