Sep 28 2006

Vicious Cycle

Published by at 8:31 am under Heartbreak Poems

I am tired of trying
tired of caring
we can’t be together
but we cant seem to stay apart
when I finally have my heart set
on walking out that door
you walk in with that cocky smile
full of empty promises
and I cant help but stay

we cant have a civil conversation
between my temper and your pride
we’re both too stubborn for our own good
that’s why we don’t leave
that’s why we cant stay
so now you’ve finally decided
you’ve had enough
when I walk in with my shy smile
full of empty promises
and you cant help but stay

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34 Responses to “Vicious Cycle”

  1. Gueston 29 Sep 2006 at 6:33 pm

    this poem is incredibly touching. i can relate to it completly. i can tell it came straight from the heart.

  2. Gueston 01 Nov 2006 at 1:58 am

    Nice poem..

  3. Gueston 01 Nov 2006 at 10:45 am

    I like it because it relates to me and my boyfriend(well Ex-boyfriend)

  4. Gueston 11 Nov 2006 at 7:58 pm

    Out of all the poems in this site. This onez awsome. Next to mine of course. lol. Kinda what I\’m going thru now.
    I love the poem.

  5. brendaon 03 Dec 2006 at 10:08 pm

    poem

  6. Megzzzon 09 Jan 2007 at 9:48 pm

    Bravo! lol I like it. A lot! lol :roll

  7. Tinkerbellon 17 Jan 2007 at 3:32 pm

    thats a good poem and a lot of gurls can relat to the topic with heart break and all it is really good keep up the good work!!!!! :grin

  8. meon 30 Jan 2007 at 4:55 pm

    mine

  9. Monicaon 04 Feb 2007 at 1:53 am

    i looovee this poem. i can realli relate to it. && i can see that alot of other people can to.
    🙂

  10. cindyon 19 Mar 2007 at 11:40 pm

    Loved this poem so much i went trhough this recently and i thankyou for making it so easy to bare

  11. Natashaon 19 Apr 2007 at 1:15 pm

    🙁 Going through that right now and this poem took the words right of my mind

  12. Hanajimaon 23 Apr 2007 at 2:37 pm

    Your poem is really good and has a bitter feel to it. I really like it. :p

  13. Ariel Martinezon 10 May 2007 at 5:16 pm

    I think that your poem is amazing, just that feel of pain kept in your heart. i have gone through the cycle and think that the worlds that you wrote are the truth

  14. lilmiskatie07on 30 May 2007 at 10:08 pm

    🙁 wow I know how this feels I have been through it before and it hurts sooooooo bad and everytime I think of him I get so mad I let it go on for that long!

  15. amandaon 02 Jun 2007 at 10:43 am

    this is exactly the relationship i just got out of. and itz hard. love hurts when u lose it.

  16. BraveGirl<3on 05 Jun 2007 at 7:26 am

    This poem is really good. I can see exactly where you coming from. Think everyone can. It\’s Great 🙂 xx

  17. jaymieon 18 Jun 2007 at 9:36 am

    DAT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM BUT NOT MEANINGFUL ENUF UR HIDING SUMFIN JUST LET IT GO AND YOU WILL BE OK XXX :p

  18. lexuson 06 Jul 2007 at 3:45 pm

    i can relate to this poem a lot. this poem is exactly what i feel.

  19. geuston 10 Nov 2007 at 12:36 pm

    This poem is the bomb cause this is what im goin through right now! its crazii! :zzz

  20. Sarah Kristineon 05 Apr 2008 at 6:59 pm

    this poem is reallie deep your righting is so pure and real i love it.

  21. Corrielynon 01 Jun 2008 at 8:38 pm

    I so know what this poem is saying.
    It\’s exactually what happens between me and my boyfriend. I love this poem. 🙂

  22. meeon 19 Jun 2008 at 2:08 am

    seriously…?

    i think my boyfriend wrote this.
    it describes what he thinks of me…
    about the cocky smile..

    and how we both talk about leaving.. but never do..

    whats the jake kids last name?
    because my boyfriends name is jake…

    thats reallllly creepy to be honest!

  23. meeon 19 Jun 2008 at 2:12 am

    okay.. seriously…

    my boyfriends name is jake
    he has a tember.. and i have pride issues…
    we\’re always talking about leaving and breaking up for a while now… but yet we love eachother too much to do so…

    whats this kids last name??
    because honest to god i think he wrote it…?

  24. Abigailon 29 Nov 2008 at 3:34 am

    This is exactly how my husband and I feel, it is good to know that there\’s people out there with the same problems we have and that we are not wrong to stay together!

  25. Mariaon 03 Dec 2008 at 10:09 am

    🙂 this is exactly wat im goin through rite now i luv this poem

  26. XXHEARTBROKEXXon 04 Apr 2009 at 2:23 am

    that came from the heart and i can tell man it spoke 2 me you now i mean it was so deep

  27. jackon 30 May 2009 at 12:57 am

    ] :cry

  28. jacobon 30 May 2009 at 1:11 am

    :cry

  29. krystalon 08 Aug 2009 at 2:55 pm

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  30. Rosieon 05 Dec 2009 at 2:42 am

    OMG, I swear i wrote that.. (Not litteraly) But i could have.. That is ridculously accurate.. I love it so much i wrote it down and im goin to keep it forever and maybe send it to my ex.. :grin

  31. reyon 25 Feb 2010 at 9:42 am

    when reading this poem i cant help but smile cuz it reminds me of my last relationship…i was the one with the cocky smile and empty promises and no matter what i did she always came back 8) as i matter of fact shes still there if i want her back.

  32. Lexyon 28 Feb 2010 at 5:26 pm

    This Is Like, Everything About Me And My Current Ex, But Weve Broken Up About 50 Thousand Times. Creepy Thing Is His Name Is Jake As Well. Haa. Kind Of Made Me Cry Though.. I Mss Him SO Much Already :/

  33. Sammyon 29 Apr 2010 at 7:06 pm

    this poem made me cry cause i used to date a guy named jake and we both went were stuborn and let our pride get in the way i cried when i read this but it was amazing! :sigh

  34. deborahon 12 Aug 2010 at 12:29 am

    love is an itch in your heart you cant scratch :alien:

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