Oct 27 2009

What hurt most of all

Published by at 11:59 pm under Betrayal Poems

What hurt most of all by: Taniyia

 
I remember it all
You watched  me fall
You lied  
I cried
You attacked my religion  
You made a decision
I wanted more than anything
To be there for you
To be someone you could come to
You choose not to care
To act like I wasn't there
You manipulated my feelings
You crushed my heart
When it was you I loved from the start
Even when my friends said no
Even when I knew I should've let you go
I stayed and was crushed
It hit me in a rush
I literally was arguing with myself that it wasn't true
But I knew it was
If only because
We had nothing at all
And that hurt most of all
 
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7 Responses to “What hurt most of all”

  1. anonymouson 06 Nov 2009 at 5:38 pm

    this is beautiful

  2. maria on 13 Feb 2010 at 12:27 pm

    i like this pome.

  3. ashishkumar haldaron 21 May 2010 at 6:04 pm

    I FELT SOMEONE SAID WHAT I ALWAYS WANTED TO SAY…..BEAUTIFUL POEM THAT COMES FROM ONES SOUL……

  4. mari g.on 01 Jun 2010 at 7:42 am

    I like your poem .This is how my brother must of felt before he decided to commit sucide.

  5. debbieon 12 Aug 2010 at 1:21 am

    you have to give love to receive it : you need a guide on the art of loving not a business decision.

  6. victoriaon 12 Aug 2010 at 1:23 am

    like a bolt from the blue

  7. baaby54on 09 Sep 2010 at 4:10 pm

    That is such a beautiful poem.
    ^_^

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