Dec 18 2005

What now

Published by at 11:21 am under Heartbreak Poems

What now (Heartbreak Poem) ?

By Edoria

I looked forward to sleep.
Sometimes I dream, and you are there.
And then
I realize,
Here’s the reality of my life I’ve come to hate.
Careless whispers heated the coldness of my smile.
Once upon a time,
Long sexy strokes of confidence coloured my skin,
Because then,
You were there.
I don’t know if I’ll ever forget
How you made everything to me
Seem complete.
You were the passion underneath the harshness of those tidal waves.
They used to sink me and drown me.
And then,
You gave your breath to me,
And then
I tasted the sweet flavor of life.
Now, I need to break the intricate web,
You have woven around me.
Safety cradles me like a soft lullaby.
But then,
That was the only song I wanted to hear.
And then, you threw it away.
Bittersweet sensations,
Lingered like an unwanted scar.
You hid me far away from the painful truth,
And then
You tossed your heart high into the nighttime sky.
Far enough,
I cried because I couldn’t see it.
Now, I look forward to sleep.
I can dream,
When you were there.
But like love insatiable,
You remain where memories call like haunting winds.

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16 Responses to “What now”

  1. Raulon 05 Mar 2007 at 9:04 am

    This is the best poem ever G….i know what thats like… :cry i feel that every single day of my life…when she left me..and then went out with another…the one i used to call…..friend…keep them coming and dont ever stop wirtting G…my god bless you and be with you in your troubled and darkest times…

  2. Nikkion 05 Mar 2007 at 11:51 am

    :cry that is so cute n sad … its great 🙂

  3. meredithon 29 Mar 2007 at 10:54 pm

    this poem is truly amazing, you are an amazing poet you made me cry.
    this poem is so much like what im going through

  4. summeron 03 Apr 2007 at 12:39 am

    this is sooooo cute :sigh

  5. kateon 09 Dec 2007 at 12:55 pm

    :sigh :cry :sigh :cry :sigh :cry :sigh :cry

  6. Tayloron 22 Feb 2008 at 5:32 pm

    I have a boyfriend, but i want to end it with him.Hes such a jerk. And i don\’t like him at all. The guy i like is always there for me when hes hurting my feelings. I want to end it but he\’ll probably hurt me. What do i do. I know the guy i like will be there when i do it just to make sure he doesn\’t hurt
    me.I hope I\’m doing the right thing and this is true for me as well: and I\’m scared to get close to anyone because everyone who ever said \”i\’ll be there\”,has left Me.

  7. angleon 19 May 2008 at 2:42 pm

    :cry :cry i love him but he loves her 😕 😕 what do i do? [B]love is pain[/B]

  8. saraon 28 May 2008 at 8:33 pm

    :sigh idk but this isnt exactly what i was looking for to describe wat im feeling but its retty close!

  9. nickyon 18 Jun 2008 at 9:43 pm

    i feel the same way damn thats soooo freakin true

  10. ninaon 02 Nov 2008 at 10:45 pm

    :sigh this relates to me so much. it let left me breathless

  11. audreyon 18 Nov 2008 at 6:42 am

    :cry :cry :cry :cry COOL!! I felt those too..

  12. kellyon 05 Dec 2008 at 2:32 pm

    i love him to death but some of the things he dose if just weird and not normal.i wont to brake up with him but i dont know how! he is the sweetest guy ever but i dont think he is the one for me.and one have any odeas?

  13. samon 13 Apr 2009 at 1:17 pm

    That\’s a part of wot am feeling rite now n the truth is i love him more than my life.. sometimes he voice out my thoughts b4 me n there are moments wen we both are at the same wavelengths… then i simply messed up everything n in a matter of a few moments we r separated by an abyss… i love him n i think dat he\’ll return back to me.. well i hope so… the poem is gr8

  14. IF;(L)on 28 Oct 2009 at 3:44 am

    Well if you dont feel the same way he feels i think you shud break up with him becoz oviously u havent found mr.Wright just tell him how you feel he will hate u at frist and be upset but then he will realize u did it for the good becoz if he loves u and you dont love him thats making him go threw mor epain if you thinkg about it hope it works out xxx[B]null[/B] 🙂

  15. Kim phillipson 06 Nov 2009 at 9:55 am

    im in this situation now. i love my boyfriend so much..i cry when were apart,and i cry when were together cause i dont feel like im exactly wat he wants. now im under the impression that i jus have to do wats best for me and let him go.

  16. shanelleon 25 Jun 2010 at 3:39 pm

    there are oonly two words to describe this poem – beautiful and true

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