Jul 30 2010

When a heart says Goodbye

Published by at 8:13 pm under Goodbye Poems

It’s the lonely feeling in the pit of your stomach;
The never ending hurt that rips through your soul.
It’s the single tear that trails silently down your face,
The emptiness leaves you bare and cold.

It’s the vast distance between your heart and his…
Not touching, unbending, no longer intertwined.
A realization from way down deep,
The hearts’ bridge, you cannot find.

It’s the silent scream that your heart yells;
A shout released when you know the end is near…
It’s the knot of anxiety that stays with you.
Just another emotion to add to your fear.

A heart’s goodbye…it’s a hurtful thing.
It’s the consequence of “Cinderella’s lie”.
Hearts break…souls go bare…it’s a love that’s lost.
Everyone loses when a heart says goodbye.

This post was submitted by katibabi.

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6 responses so far

6 Responses to “When a heart says Goodbye”

  1. Tarunaon 31 Jul 2010 at 6:33 am

    It’s really a lovely poem… mind blowing… love it…

  2. deborahon 12 Aug 2010 at 12:16 am

    :angel: thats the feelings of love. pity it never was unrequited. maybe your head and heart showed love but your actions told the truth.
    :sick: :ninja: :ninja: ;-( 😆 ;-( 😆 😆 ;-( maybe you should dust yourself off and try again.. :kiss:

  3. poetry_girlon 14 Sep 2010 at 4:22 am

    Raw and passionate yet eloquent and articulate…very nice. My favorite aspect is how you expressed the anguish so completely yet kept the length appropriate. Well done.

  4. pixieon 23 Oct 2010 at 5:56 pm

    I love how one instantly knows what you’re talking about and later still puzzles out the meaning.

  5. Ameliaon 14 Dec 2010 at 2:17 pm

    The last stanza still needs a little polish, but this is some great work! Wow!

  6. *bRoKeN*-wOrDs-4-u*on 04 Jan 2011 at 4:41 pm

    Amazing, describes how i feel right now……ughh 🙁

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