Love Poems & Poetry

Jun 20 2011

you said you loved me

You said you loved me I know you lied,
I could see the fear in your eyes.

A broken heart cannot be fixed,
kill me now kill me quick.

Your love for me is now dead,
a distent memorie in your head.

you said you loved me I know you lied,
you could see the hurt in my eyes.

A dreamy place where spirits go,
lost souls down below.

you said you loved me I know you lied,
as the last bit of life fell out my eyes.

(4 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)

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8 Responses to “you said you loved me”

1. # OneandOnlyon 20 Jun 2011 at 11:15 am

   this is beautiful ; exactly how i feel

2. # darkrainbow123on 20 Jun 2011 at 4:23 pm

   omg thats totally why i wrote it 😉

3. # pixieon 20 Jun 2011 at 5:07 pm

   this is… im astonished
   its awesum

4. # Toniion 21 Jun 2011 at 12:09 am

   Beautifully said ;-(

5. # meghanon 21 Jun 2011 at 1:51 am

   abosolutly beautiful ^_^

6. # darkrainbow123on 22 Jun 2011 at 7:24 pm

   😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 thnx guys

7. # DarkRavenon 24 Jun 2011 at 2:14 am

   That is so deep……. ;-( great job

8. # Josiah13on 24 Jun 2011 at 4:46 pm

   …..i hope your eyes are okay man u shud probably get them check 😮

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