May 28 2011
You were my blessing through and through
Crying and hurting like never before
Wishing I never messed up as I did so many times before
You made me a better man, you truly are a blessing
I don’t know what to do without your love, it hits me hard, baby it’s depressing
Your eyes are the reason I wake up each morning with a smile
My love has forever come back, I’m sorry it took awhile
I know I cant make you feel for me as you used too
But give my love one more chance, you’ll never go another day feeling empty like you used too
I love you more and more with each passing day
I never knew what true love was until you showed up…..right in my way
I’ll see you around and I’ll hope nothing but the best
But sweetheart you are my one…my only, only time will tell of this test
I’ll forgive you for anything you may have done wrong
But I’ll never forgive myself for ever letting this go on
One day I’ll be happy, even if it’s not with you
But honestly my heart will never be the same knowing that I lost you.
(1 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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u used “used to(*)” twice which is sloppy
but overall, i like this
the rest of the rhyming was done in a very elegant manner
the meaning was great
the emotions were easy to relate to
yes, i love this very much ^_^
Some typos, nothing great, overall a fine poem.
Ps. @Pixie, Ha~hahahahahahaha!
Dun take concern. It’s internal.