Jul 07 2012

You won’t know

Published by at 7:18 pm under Betrayal Poems

My thoughts are filled with love
When you are in my mind
I never thought that I’d be here
That I’d be left behind

They say you don’t hold grudges
This once I disagree
But what you really have to know
Is that I’m so sorry

Hollow words that don’t mean much,
I know that’s how it seems
But I still cannot sleep at night
Because of haunted dreams

Shadows stalk my every move
While tears shine in my eye
But you won’t know how much it hurts
Because you can’t see me cry

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12 responses so far

12 Responses to “You won’t know”

  1. Maxon 08 Jul 2012 at 3:39 am

    Hey! Guess what? I’m back from vacation. I’m sure most of you guys missed me, but please do hold back your applause. Yet, it saddens me to return and see your poems hold no progress. How utterly disappointing. I expected more from you guys, wait, no I didn’t! Well it’s nice to be back and read your attempts at poetry ^-^

  2. pixieon 08 Jul 2012 at 9:39 am

    You know what?
    I’m very sorry, but I will not sit here and let you insult my poetry, you low-life piece of shit. You have no right to come here and say what you want to just because you find yourself superior to those people who can actually understand and relate to what is, in my opinion, good poetry.
    You are an asshole. You deserve to die.
    Go sit in your fucking corner and rot.

  3. hocktagon 08 Jul 2012 at 11:00 am

    Max, Fuck of you peice of shit. Poetry isn’t something that should be ever insulted, and is an art form.
    Leave this forum, fucktard.

  4. merryon 12 Jul 2012 at 12:19 am

    oh my god, what an retarded lay you must be “pixie”

    read what you have written here, this is an insult, my dear. your insanity in the need of being “for ego” approved is just a shame for being part of the cube. You are defo leaving it now, get out here, your nothing more than an angry cow.

    “You deserve to die”, oh my god, dear get a life and a some medication.


  5. Maxon 12 Jul 2012 at 6:34 am

    I feel the love from u guys just like baby Jesus feels your prayers at night. Hmmmm, I do agree with merry. You all should listen to this user. He or she holds some wisdom. It’s so nice to see I’m not the only one with common sense out there =D

  6. pixieon 12 Jul 2012 at 9:31 am

    Good lord. Why fucking spam my poem?
    Also, merry? You’re a fucking idiot. Don’t act superior, because you’re nothing more than a mindless retard who wants attention.
    Max? Whatever is going on in your head cannot be healthy. Your thoughts are muddled and illogical. Please get a fucking grip and stop commenting on things you don’t understand.
    The both of you are morons.
    Get a life.

  7. robynon 10 Mar 2014 at 1:10 am

    Wow ….This Is Beautiful….DICKHEAD… xD

  8. pixieon 10 Mar 2014 at 3:15 pm

    Uhm. Excuse me? o.o

  9. robynon 10 Mar 2014 at 5:48 pm


  10. pixieon 10 Mar 2014 at 6:25 pm

    Oh. I see. Thank you, robyn :p

  11. Dennison 10 Apr 2014 at 3:49 am

    Pixie, you’re amazing as always. Keep writing, the world needs more people like you. Haters gonna hate. Stay cool 8) girl! =)

  12. pixieon 10 Apr 2014 at 3:52 pm

    Thanks for the support, Dennis c:

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