Jun 25 2011
Your Guided hands
You are my friend, my helper and leader.
My lost counsel and my open theater.
Your entertaining and your funny. Your special, nice and your cute like a bunny.
When I see you a smile lights up my face. I can’t help but to run to you like it’s a race.
Your my hope when there is none, your my enjoyment when there is no fun.
I love you always and forever, and never never.
Your the brains between us your smart, brilliant,clever.
Your the hands that guide me to keep going on in life without a sound. When there is no light to guide me on the path of life, your hands are found.
I love you now, and I’ll love you forever. As long as were together, and excited. I will follow your hands, as long as they keep me guided.
(2 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)
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some of this makes no sense. but thats fine, since the rest of the poem is so … open
i like the way it rhymes, though in some places it seems forced
few spelling mistakes, easily overlooked
great poem
yea i know i kinda messed this one up i fixed all the mistakes after i submitted it which is stupid
ull get it next time :p