Jun 25 2011

Your Guided hands

Published by at 12:51 am under Forever Love Poems

You are my friend, my helper and leader.
My lost counsel and my open theater.

Your entertaining and your funny. Your special, nice and your cute like a bunny.

When I see you a smile lights up my face. I can’t help but to run to you like it’s a race.

Your my hope when there is none, your my enjoyment when there is no fun.

I love you always and forever, and never never.
Your the brains between us your smart, brilliant,clever.

Your the hands that guide me to keep going on in life without a sound. When there is no light to guide me on the path of life, your hands are found.

I love you now, and I’ll love you forever. As long as were together, and excited. I will follow your hands, as long as they keep me guided.

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3 Responses to “Your Guided hands”

  1. pixieon 25 Jun 2011 at 9:31 am

    some of this makes no sense. but thats fine, since the rest of the poem is so … open
    i like the way it rhymes, though in some places it seems forced
    few spelling mistakes, easily overlooked
    great poem

  2. Josiah13on 25 Jun 2011 at 4:56 pm

    yea i know i kinda messed this one up i fixed all the mistakes after i submitted it which is stupid

  3. pixieon 25 Jun 2011 at 5:17 pm

    ull get it next time :p

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