Dec 02 2010

Your Heaven in Our Hell

Published by at 7:27 am under emo Poems

The Pain You Have Left Deep Within Me Is Like Poison. Flowing Through My Body…Streaming Through My Veins. The Hurt You Have Left Behind Is Killing Me, The Memories Come Rushing Back. Tying Me In A Rope Of Hurt And Torment. I Close My Eyes To Block Out The Misery, But All I Can Feel Is The Aching In My Heart. The Longing And The Yearning That Will Never Go…
I Lift My Arms And Plunge The Dagger Down, Deep Into My Chest. The Feeling Of Pure Bliss Washes Over Me And I Feel Free. The Feeling Of Sweet Agony Flows Through Me And I Feel My Blood Spill Around Me, Covering Me Like A Warm Silk Blanket.
I Feel My Spirit Lift Out Of My Body, And I Dance With The Wind. I Smile, Knowing That I Won’t Feel Any Pain. Never. I Will Always Love You, Yes. But I Won’t Have To Feel Any Pain In Doing So. I Look Down, And I See You. I See You Sleeping; You Look So Peaceful, Like An Angel. But, You’re My Angel. I Float Down And Softly Whisper…’I Love You And I Always Have, I Always Will. You Will Always, Always Be My One True Love. I Will Never Forget You, I Will Never Let Anyone Hurt You. I Will Always Stand By Your Side, No Matter What Happens. You’re The One Who Gave Me The Breath Of Life, Who Made Me See That The World Can Be A Brighter Place. You Made Me Smile; You Made Me A Better Person. Even Though You Hurt Me, I Forgive You And I Still Love You. Remember…You’re So Special, If People Can’t See That Then You Know They’re Not Worth It. You, My Darling, Are One In A Million. You’re The Brightest Star In The Darkest Sky And Your Perfect.’
I Turn Away And Disappear Into The Night Sky, I Close My Eyes And Let Myself Go…

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7 responses so far

7 Responses to “Your Heaven in Our Hell”

  1. kristinaon 02 Dec 2010 at 4:49 pm

    this is the best poem that i have ever read, but if you like these poems you should look up briemo. he has even better poems :alien: :angel: :bandit: 👿

  2. meghan222on 02 Dec 2010 at 9:29 pm

    I understand why she would kill herself,but why go that far? 😮 🙁 🙂

  3. iwait4you4everon 03 Dec 2010 at 5:20 am

    Simply ………… WOW…!!!! You blow my mind.. in a good way

  4. jae willson 03 Dec 2010 at 9:57 pm

    i can truely feel the hurt behind this poem…

  5. iiThoughtEverythingWuldB4evaon 21 Dec 2010 at 7:06 pm

    Haha, thanks guys!

    Meghan: To be honest, I have NO idea. I guess I just wanted to express how I felt ’cause seriously? He hurt me bad.

    iwait4you4ever: Aw, thanks! 😀

    Jae: Yeah, thanks. I used my feelings to actually write this!

    Once again, thanks 😛

  6. BrokenBabyon 21 Dec 2010 at 10:25 pm

    The best poem I’ve ever read, in my entire life.
    Honestly, this reminds me of how I feel about my ex.
    But I could never think to write something that good.
    Amazing, haha.

  7. CoraBellon 02 Feb 2011 at 12:09 am

    This is absolutly amazing! i write poetry but i could NEVER write anything as good as this (:

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