Jan 10 2011

Blood Rain

Published by at 6:02 pm under emo Poems

I’m surround by your words
They swirl inside my head
My heart is black
It once was red

You came into my life
And you charmed me
I loved you so much
I spoke the words “I love thee”

After a while
With me, you grew tired
You said to move on
Your love for me expired

You wanted to be free
So I let you go
You kept my heart
I am not whole

You once said you loved me
But I know that is not true
I have seen you say to another
“I have never loved anyone more than you”

I scream inside
I am in an emotional blight
I cry in sadness
In anger, in fright

Inside, upon my mental walls, I bang
Each blow after another
You don’t feel this
You have “eachother”

I see you in my dreams
My life, my thoughts
You don’t know how much pain
To me you’ve brought.

I bang upon the walls, inside me head
I cry out in emotional pain
When will this internal suffering end?
When blood falls as rain.

This post was submitted by Skyeraid.

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7 responses so far

7 Responses to “Blood Rain”

  1. sriramanon 11 Jan 2011 at 4:25 am

    this blood is lovable heart blood

  2. iwait4you4everon 11 Jan 2011 at 5:08 am

    sad : /

  3. Moonelf313on 13 Jan 2011 at 12:28 pm

    Painful :'(

  4. angel709on 13 Jan 2011 at 2:28 pm

    this is an amazing and heart felt poem!

  5. brokenloveon 04 Feb 2011 at 3:51 pm

    this screams my life. it took everything in my body not to cry

  6. Karmaon 07 Feb 2011 at 10:11 am

    oh, this is like you know my heart. this is deep, i love it…

  7. JoJoon 24 Feb 2011 at 9:08 pm

    Beautiful and sad ;-(

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