Jul 09 2011
Make Me Love You
Come closer baby, I don’t want to miss,
The unparalleled taste of your sweet kiss.
Don’t be afraid, put your hand on my skin,
Show me once why I love you again.
I give you myself, both body and soul,
We’re two parts joining to make one whole.
Show me the feel of your warm embrace,
Send sparks through my head while my heart starts to race,
Oh God, now I see,
What you’re doing to me…
Making me love you.
This post was submitted by Justaboy.
good words!
this poem is ffing awesome! great work!
Thanks. 🙂
I like this one a lot (:
The one thing about this poem I simply cannot get over, is the fact that that last line, the one that says everything, is emphasized so well. Because it interrupts your rhyme scheme, which makes it stand out.
😀 Thank you! I felt it was pointed and…right, i guess is the word. It felt good to write, anyway!
lol great writtin loveed it :love:
wow…that is amaising i love this great work
OMG..!!!!!!! THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME POEM #I LOVE IT : ) 😀