Jul 09 2011

Make Me Love You

Published by at 10:28 pm under Cute Love Poems

Come closer baby, I don’t want to miss,
The unparalleled taste of your sweet kiss.
Don’t be afraid, put your hand on my skin,
Show me once why I love you again.
I give you myself, both body and soul,
We’re two parts joining to make one whole.
Show me the feel of your warm embrace,
Send sparks through my head while my heart starts to race,
Oh God, now I see,
What you’re doing to me…
Making me love you.

This post was submitted by Justaboy.

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9 responses so far

9 Responses to “Make Me Love You”

  1. adminon 10 Jul 2011 at 3:39 am

    good words!

  2. serena93on 10 Jul 2011 at 5:48 am

    this poem is ffing awesome! great work!

  3. Justaboyon 11 Jul 2011 at 12:41 am

    Thanks. 🙂

  4. Tiffanyon 11 Jul 2011 at 6:41 pm

    I like this one a lot (:

  5. pixieon 17 Jul 2011 at 2:48 pm

    The one thing about this poem I simply cannot get over, is the fact that that last line, the one that says everything, is emphasized so well. Because it interrupts your rhyme scheme, which makes it stand out.

  6. Justaboyon 17 Jul 2011 at 6:42 pm

    😀 Thank you! I felt it was pointed and…right, i guess is the word. It felt good to write, anyway!

  7. sonion 23 Aug 2011 at 7:54 pm

    lol great writtin loveed it :love:

  8. samon 12 Sep 2011 at 10:18 pm

    wow…that is amaising i love this great work

  9. dajahon 19 Apr 2012 at 9:28 pm


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