Jun 25 2011
If you were Mine
When I close my eyes, I see you
When I open them a raiser tear falls
When I’m restless, I’m thinking of you
When I go to sleep, You’re there beside me…smiling
When I wake up, I scream because you’re not there
If you were MINE, I’d say I luv u and meen it
if you were MINE, I’d kiss you with al my heart
If you were MINE, I’d love you like no tomorrow
IF YOU WERE MINE…..ID NEVER LEAVE………
(3 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
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like the meaning. like the way u made it easy to relate to ur feelings
the overall poem, though, isnt really sumthing id read twice
just my opinion
Lots of spelling and grammer errors, also inconsistant rhyme and ryhthm. Also the text language such as “luv” makes it seem like a young “teenage” poem