Jun 25 2011

If you were Mine

Published by at 12:55 am under Thinking of You Poems

When I close my eyes, I see you
When I open them a raiser tear falls
When I’m restless, I’m thinking of you
When I go to sleep, You’re there beside me…smiling
When I wake up, I scream because you’re not there
If you were MINE, I’d say I luv u and meen it
if you were MINE, I’d kiss you with al my heart
If you were MINE, I’d love you like no tomorrow
IF YOU WERE MINE…..ID NEVER LEAVE………

This post was submitted by Xx_DarkRaven_xX.

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2 Responses to “If you were Mine”

  1. pixieon 25 Jun 2011 at 9:27 am

    like the meaning. like the way u made it easy to relate to ur feelings
    the overall poem, though, isnt really sumthing id read twice
    just my opinion

  2. auraflyeron 07 Jul 2011 at 2:58 pm

    Lots of spelling and grammer errors, also inconsistant rhyme and ryhthm. Also the text language such as “luv” makes it seem like a young “teenage” poem

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