Oct 24 2010
The Internal War of My Heart
I fall to my knees, a sob crawling up my throat.
A cry excapes my lips as I kneel down in pain.
I burn, my emotions a turmoil, yet my heart is ice cold.
Why? My heart is broken, shattered, split.
Why? Because you said these words ” I don’t love you anymore.”
Why? I don’t know, all I know is that I can barely breathe.
I am curled up into a ball gasping between the sobs,
I cannot think, only to cry and breathe.
Inside emotions rage over one another like a waves in a stormy ocean.
They rise up like a tital wave, each has an undertow of reason.
Pain: the ache of the heartbreak
Love: my heart will not give up.
Saddness: you left me
Rage: YOU LEFT ME!!!!
They crash over one another each trying to rule.
Only the little feeling of hope ties them up with a thin golden thread.
It won’t last long but I have time.
Time is said to heal all wounds, even those of a broken heart.
But can time alone heal a heart that has only felt love once?
We’ll find out.
this poem is really good. i love to write heart break poems, because my most recent heartbreaks are still fresh even after 6 months of sobbing. i write my poems hopping one day those guys who hurt me will read them and relize what they did to me. and this poem is brilliant, wonderful and so true. well done.
Awesome poem, but @ Stanley…
I dn’t get why yu tlked about weight loss?? lol
No offense, jus wonderin….?? xD