Feb 18 2011

Your Tar Pit

Published by at 11:27 pm under Sad Love Poems


You took my heart,
You took my love,
You left me shattered,
But this is to far.

Not a memory,
Not a picture,
Not a letter,
You left a worse reminder.

You built a wall, around my heart
Not of wood nor stone,
Not of iron or steal,
The tar of heartbreak, from it is made

I am trapped inside,
Alone in the dark,
When I reach out, I am stuck,
When any reach in, I cannot be freed.

I try to love, yet am caught
My tears do not wash it away.
Like the dinosaurs caught in the tar,
Will I die in a from of tar also?

I can feel a life-line,
A thin, golden rope of hope.
I need another to pull me out,
But none have discovered it.

But it is still there, I hope it will be found
Voices call from the outside, my name is spoken!
I feel a tug on the golden line,
Am I saved?

I Hope so …

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7 responses so far

7 Responses to “Your Tar Pit”

  1. Brendanon 24 Feb 2011 at 11:19 pm

    Hello. My name is Brendan, I was wondering, what is your real name? This poem is awesome, and I just want to find out what your name is so that I can have a name for this poem.

  2. Skyeraidon 02 Mar 2011 at 3:21 am

    @ Brendan, I don’t actually like my real name, I prefer to go by Skyeraid, or Skye. I prefer to be unique and my real name is just to ordinary. I hoped that helped at all.

  3. Skyeraidon 02 Mar 2011 at 3:39 am

    P.S. sorry I wasn’t able to respond any sooner, I hadn’t checked this site in a little while.

  4. madelaine7on 02 Mar 2011 at 2:22 pm

    I love this poem!! Ahh it relates to me so well. It’s great:)

  5. Maddieon 03 Mar 2011 at 4:58 am

    this is so amazing!!, it also relates to me

  6. Nkululekoon 04 Apr 2011 at 7:47 am

    Hlw skye ay no tht poem rock neh,Crazy poem ,anyway if u dnt mind write 4 me a poem ill give u a topic dankie

  7. Skyeraidon 02 May 2011 at 3:31 am

    @Nkululeko: sorry it took so long to get back to you. I haven’t been on much recently, tell me the topic and I’ll see what I can do.

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